this is probably the most beautiful thing I have ever read.

Love this story, incredibly written.

I've never reviewed anything on Fanfic before, although I do read quite a lot, but this has left me in the most beautiful tears that I had to write a review. I truly don't cry easily while reading, but this. THIS. This is unparalleled. Exceptional work. It's beautiful.

Just wanted to say that was a beautifully written story. I can't believe it made me cry so much. Thank you

Wow. I just read this for the second time and I can't even put into words how beautifully written this is. This is hands down, the best one-shot I have ever read. Maybe the best fanfiction I have ever read. You capture every essence of what it means to grow old with someone and I can't express how much I love this. I don't cry easily while reading, and this makes me cry every single time.

Thank you for sharing, it really is incredible.

Shelby

Very beautifully written

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Oh wow, this is amazing! I loved it. I don't like that they had problems, but I love that they worked through them and came out stronger than ever.

I really hope we're right about Christopher Mark as a name because that would be perfect.

Great fic!

My god, this was beautiful. I'm still crying lke a baby, I admit it. Incredible job for a first fic!

I loved how they settled into married life so well, how the memories intertwined and how you gave them the opportunity to grow old together and get over all the problems they might have encountered, as every normal couple does. Normalcy was a keyword in this, especially in their last years together. Those were my favorite part, despite it was so sad it brought me to tears.

A really touching story, I'm so glad I stumbled upon it!

this is so much, i love it so so sos much i am writing and crying all at the same time i am actually crying out loud like if i lost someone and i am grieving. it is so lovely and soooo sad all at the same time amd i love it very much even though you made me cry ;)
Mary

Really beautiful...continue writing like this :)

You had me weeping at the end.
Bravo!

The last time I cried while reading something was when Melanie died in Gone With the Wind. So, when I say that your story made me cried, it is a very big deal.
Congratulations on a well written, cute, real and emotional story!

I was in tears for the last part ! I used so much tissues !

It was great ! We can see how much they love each other !
The end was so sad but so beautiful in the same time !

I liked witnessing the milestones of MerDer's married life. They didn't have 5 chatty children and they didn't live until 110, but they were still very much in love of each other all these years. Thanks for sharing your story with us!