Goodbye my friend, though we had our disagreements I still saw you as a good friend.

Awww yeah! Andrew ultimately decided to get back together with Abby. That makes me, the reader, happy. However, due to the philosophical mindset of Andrew, I can tell that despite his sense of happiness, he also has a deep feeling of sadness in respect to his lack of freedom. To me, I would also enjoy the idea of having one to love (despite the fact that is not currently the case), and I am personally tired of my freedom, but of course that's me. Andrew is a different individual, but I hope in the end he may accept his love over his desire to do as he wishes. Overall, it's good to see some old group members like CJ again. I wonder if Humphrey and Kate and the others will also appear...? I digress; wonderful work on this dynamic section, my friend. Bam!

So Andrew and Abby got back together aww, I was hoping this would happen they are perfect for each other. Awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next one, keep up the great work.

Sorry I have not reviewed in awhile, Alpha. I too have been busy with the job and college applications and the whatnot (making up sleep on weekends when I sleep basically the entire day away...haha). Either way, I witness that this section's focal point is of that between the two brothers. Andrew has noticed his distanced moods as of late, but so has Darryl. It seems throughout time that Andrew has, indeed, done increasingly less and less "human" contact (which I assume meant wolves here). However, with some conversing with Darryl, perhaps Andrew may be able to escape this mental rut to which has has been trapped for last - dear God, how many chapters has it been now? - many chapters. I'm hoping that Andrew too can transcend this dark void of his mind. Also, it's sad to hear that this story may be ending soon. Overall, though, your decisions are your own and I know you're going to make the rest great!

Good chapter also, Ha! I have Warframe earlier! Steam Rules Oh Yah!

Great chapter and I can't wait for another one, I'm actually sad about this coming to an end soon, but I really hope you will make a sequel this story, its just so good.

-Street Wolf

Another deep thought chapter, I see. I wonder if Andrew has any new enemies lying in wait for him...for he seems to have taken care of all past foes, like egotistical bastards and groveling exes. Also, if I read correctly at the beginning of the chapter, Emily apparently isn't open...thus it appears Abby would be Andrew's best bet now. I'm eager to see them back together if they're going to do so. Also, I definitely agree with Andrew on summer clothing...I just wish to wear baggy apparel in the summer, despite the heat. Also, "Azxoll: Inchoation" should be updated here real soon, in case you're wondering. Either way, good job Alpha.

I love the songs they are awsome

Yet another great chapter, I enjoyed reading it, I can't wait for the next one. Keep up the awesome work you are doing now.

-Street Wolf

Lol

A shorter chapter, but an important one. I now know that Andrew would have a difficulty being with another girl, like Emily. Abby knows some of Andrew's dark secrets, the ones that "open Hell." Haha. But anyway, Andrew still has a love for Abby, making it difficult for him to choose where he goes next relationship-wise. I'd choose Abby, Andrew. You two make a good pair, but that's just my opinion. And next up, the Hell that is photography class. Good work, Alpha.

good chapter I really enjoyed, keep up the work and I know how you feel, kinda the same here.

I see this chapter was highlighting the choice between Emily and Abby. However, I still see the conveyed brotherly affections for Darryl, who Andrew has good respect for it seems. Also the "group" really hasn't been mentioned in awhile. I wonder if any wolves besides Abby and Darryl will hold any prominent roles, like perhaps if Garth or Humphrey have parts as they did earlier on. Yet, I would like to discuss this inner debate for Andrew on love. I can see he's eager to get with Emily, but his feelings for Abby are still there. He felt bad when he hit her away, and he still sees how beautiful she is. Personally, I think he and Abby make a good couple, and they have done a good amount with each other. However, it is not my place to say, Alpha. If Emily is Andrew's next girl, then so be it. I'll respect any decision you make, because you're a great writer! Bam!

Awesome chapter, I really can't wait for the next one, keep up the awesome writing

Another satisfying one, bro. I enjoy these chapters where not too much action occurs, but instead it is a private "in Andrew's mind" chapter. The reference back to the skinny jeans brought a smile to my lips, as I'm like "skinny jeans must be Alpha's mortal nemesis." I see Andrew's growing appeal for Emily as well...could she be his next girlfriend? I dunno. I prefer Abby, but either way would work for me. I took notice of the gradual transition you did in tone as well. You began negatively, with the groggy wakeup, and ended positively, with the "maybe this will be a good day." Continue this greatness, Alpha.