Reviews for Watching James Potter
Whitie chapter 1 . 4/5
Hello! I am a Jily Fan from Chinese. And first of all I would like to give my best wishes to you~
Having read the Chinese version of your work "New Year", I am now completely enchanted by your brilliant words! So I can't wait to come to FanFiction to enjoy more lovely stories.
I would also like to ask for your authorisation of allowing me translate "Watching James Potter" and "Loving Lily Evans" into Chinese, and I believe that Chinese fans would definitely love them! Hope it's Okay and also please feel free to tell me if you don't like this idea. Of course I will mark your name and the original websites if you'd agree.
Thank you again and I hope you all best!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
This is awesome. Speechless. Bless you
Guest chapter 1 . 7/7/2019
I like it!
Keren with an E chapter 1 . 5/4/2019
Wow! That was so prettily poignant! I enjoyed it:)
AMProngs chapter 1 . 9/16/2018
That was good. Only thing is it ended too soon. Thanks!
UnchartedDarkness chapter 1 . 3/1/2018
So beautiful! I love Jily and I love this so much! This piece played out so beautifully in my head that I wish it was a song I could keep playing on repeat and revisit again and again :)
Thanks for sharing! Keep writing xx
Azzurrolunali chapter 1 . 8/3/2017
Really cute thanks so much for writing this! Love your work!
Acciopotterevans chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
The description, I'm dying
Guest chapter 1 . 2/27/2017
Yay Jilly fluff :) I like the second person. You've done a nice job with it.
slybunny chapter 1 . 1/21/2016
My English teachers say second person perspective does not exist.

But I just looked it up.

And now they're all liars.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2015
Awww
Daisuki07 chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
Absolutely loved it. The writing feels so alive and I loved how you highlighted all of James's qualities/reasons why Lily would and eventually fall in love with him. I've read many Jily stories in the past few months (new Jily shipper here!) and some stories do great in showing why James loves Lily, but come a little short in the why Lily loves James department.

You brought out her "why" and overall perspective quite wonderfully here.
Definitely rocked the second person perspective.
FandomCollision chapter 1 . 4/17/2015
Omg this is soooooo good... This is only the 2nd story of urs that I've read but :D:D
grace.em chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
This was so brilliant. I think you really captured Lily in this. Well done.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
This was so beautiful :')
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