| Reviews for The Wedding Video |
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Emmanuel chapter 1 . 5/24 That was so cute |
Deam chapter 1 . 4/3 Really funny! |
Sam2324 chapter 1 . 2/18 That was fantastic. I especially loved Hade's comment about Percy's mother-in-law. |
DaughterOfAthena0207 chapter 1 . 6/26/2018 Awwww. I loved it! |
strawberrygirl2000 chapter 1 . 12/30/2016 beautiful I teared up sorry that I am an emotional person I just it was great, nice writing. :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2016 Wow good |
Duke157 chapter 1 . 3/16/2016 It was a very nice story, sweet Percabeth fluff... But two main things, both of which can still be corrected, one, 'PROOFED' The correct spelling is 'proved', some other grammatical errors too, but this was glaringly obvious to any reader with decent English vocabulary. The second is more of a story based topic, I would have really loved it if you had shown some sort of reaction between each sequence because the one thing that makes such kind of a wedding video story much more interesting than any regular snippets of people discussing about the couple is the couple's reaction... that is exactly why these kind of REACT videos on youtube and other social media have become such a big hit. Would have loved to see their reactions to these stuff, like Annabeth getting angry/jealous at Drew's flirting, Percy's reaction to Thalia's part, what blackjack said, any mention of their honeymoon, Percy relating to Hades about Mother-in-laws, could go on forever... Sorry about that... in the end that is your story and this is just my opinion, but this is just an idea I offer you to consider. Adieu |
Abbie chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 Awwwwwwww! This was so adorable! And all the feels! |
DieHardShipper chapter 1 . 8/14/2015 Awwwwwwwwww! Omg I just died of fluffy overload! This was so cute. (What about Calypso?) I love the idea and it was beautifully written! |
Applesnapp chapter 1 . 5/31/2015 I have not stopped laughing since I read jason walking in on percy and annabeth haveing sex, I also find it relly funny that you kept everyone in pretty good character so jason wasnt mature enough to talk about sex. Halarious. |
Andthentherewas-madness chapter 1 . 1/6/2015 This is actually really good, i dont know why i didnt fav this before, but i will now |
CuteAndIKnowIt2 chapter 1 . 1/2/2015 This one shot is amazingly written and Im gonna favorite it as soon as I get done writing this review. I love how you basically did a mental recap of some of the awesome Percabeth moments from a different persons perpective . It really goes to show how far their love really is.I also find it interesting who all you interviewed. I never saw Reyna, Hera, Hermes, Hades or others from that point of view focusing solely on Percabeth . It was refreshing. Thank you for writing this incredible one-shot for me to enjoy . Im officially leaving off on a happy note and I wish you good luck with all future stories you may write. |
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 12/8/2014 Love it! I loved how everyone said they are the most epic couple in history! |
percylover chapter 1 . 12/4/2014 it was soooooo cute and awesome |
SophieRosey2001 chapter 1 . 11/5/2014 I AM CRYING TEARS OF FEELS. I SHALL NOW COMMENCE READING EVERY FANFIC YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN |