Holly shieett. Badass Tobirama is my favoritee. Thank you for making this

This is why I want to punch tobirama when he spouts his uchiha drivel. He's a great hokage but he's a fcking racist when it comes to the Uchiha.

Oh my goodness. I have no idea if you'll see this since it's been years, but I just have to tell you-this is one of the rare fics with an OC that I love. The only other one I can think of that seemed as natural was Sakura's brother in Blind (Kanaye? It's been a while).

I really appreciated a closer look at Tobirama's character, as well as the balance between him and Sayuri. I think both of them help each other.

Just to further my point, I definitely read this for hours in a row, and stayed up until 2am just trying to get somewhere where I felt I could take a pause without driving my brain crazy trying to think of what would happen next. I know you said in one of your ANs that your life is really busy, but I hope you are still writing. Besides some little grammar mistakes and the occasional word that looks like it suffered from auto-correct, there was never a point where I thought the flow was broken.

All in all, really I just want to say thank you for writing this and I really enjoyed it!

I just finished you story and i just have to say, WOW this was so fucking greattxjcjdkjk like, just after reading the end had me fucking gasping bRUH and like, just after i got my will to live in reading ur fanfic i guess ill have to search for more again...hhhhhh i really loved your writing and i just looked at your other stories and noticed that the reign wasnt posted? Anyway i was just asking if u were working on it or if i missed it, u dont have to force urself to write it though! Is u saw this, all i wanted to say was that i really REALLY loved this story and ur writing! Peace!

Tobirama,you were the one who killed Izuna.

No seriously, what was the point of sending her to the mission? what was the point of sending her a guardian? what was the point of sending her off to die (clearly)?
Are we reading a ff about useless damsel in distress? whats the point of that

Dude gets beaten and captured, knows he will die very soon. First thing he does is sees his captors and that 1 of them is a female and proceeds to smirk at her... Yeaaah sure buddy

How flippin old is she? I have read her as a child, then as a woman, then as a girl... make up your goddamn mind.
At this point i can't even tell if she is 10 or 20

He loves her already

I really would hate to be born in the shinobi world... yuck! Way too much violence.

Poor sweet girl

OMG I'm crying like crazy...
I didn't expect his death so soon...

I want to take a moment to salute the great amount of thought and effort you put to write this amazing g peace of art. Even though it's chapter 16 and still with no hot romance I sincerely didn't get bored when all the rest of events take place.
It's not just them two and lots of cheesy romance it's a full meal of a story.

Hints of Edotensi there...
Man it's fascinating how you connect the various events an characters together.

I like Kin.
There relationship is developing bit by bit.
Their interactions are beautiful and well thought.
Kagami is cute I wish he would show up again!
I am aching for some romance but I can wait.