| Reviews for To Build a Family |
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she.a.punk chapter 16 . 11/12/2019 Oh my goodness, so so good. I did NOT see the Salvador twist coming! I'm so sad to see this fic series end but it was such a good read, amazing characterization, really enjoyable plot lines...amazing work, thanks so much for putting it into the world. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 15 . 11/12/2019 Oh man! I thought it was almost over and then you just PULLLLL him back in. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 14 . 11/12/2019 Ohhhh my goodness Mike's been kidnapped! I love protective Harvey, not wanting Mike involved, and I could just see how scared Harvey was waiting for Mike to come home after he got the note. And now? He's been kidnapped, the man is going to be a mess! Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 13 . 11/12/2019 Oh man, that might be one of my favorite chapter so far! I obviously love angst, but Mike has a really good reason for being so upset! And I loved Harvey's reactions to everything, very realistic and in character. And then Mike's breakdown "I was just a little kid..." ugh, just broke my heart all to pieces. Also love teen!Mike getting into shirtless shenanigans. Hilarious. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 12 . 11/12/2019 Awww! Yayyyy! You fixed it! That was super sweet, love mellow Dad Harvey in his green hoodie Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 11 . 11/12/2019 Oh my gosh! I did NOT see that accident coming! But, if ever you need your characters to sit still and have a heart to heart, life threatening injury is a good way to do it, gotta say! Now, on to the FIX IT chapter. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 10 . 11/12/2019 Oh good! More work Mike! ohhhh Draaaawwwwwmmmmaaaaaaa. *rubs hands together excitedly* Can't wait to see how Mike deals with new Harsh Harvey! Ohhhhh shiiit. I am honestly torn about how I feel about this. Should Mike leave Pearson Specter or not? I feel like things could be so great for them at Pearson Specter if he and Harvey could learn to have more of a balance in their relationship. But I also can see that it could be good for them to have some distance in that regard too. Can't wait to see how you develop this further! Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 9 . 11/12/2019 "He wanted to end this trial with a bang"...did you just...*facepalms at the fact that I actually thought that was funny. I liked that SOOO much more than I thought I would. I am partial to teenage Mike, but there were so many great moments in this. I loved the Harvey is a proud dad and Mike is basically an embarrassed teenager moment in the lobby on his first day. And I also loved Harvey's accidentally confirming that they are really father and son. Now I'm kind of hoping theres more older Mike stuff in this fic... Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 8 . 11/12/2019 Ok, I know I don't give you enough credit for your cleverness, so before I forget (haven't finished reading yet) Hanks comment about Mike throwing the ceiling fan out the window and Harvey nonchalantly telling Mike someone drew genitalia on his forehead literally made me laugh out loud. I'm in an office. Do you know how embarrassing that is? OMG I love Jake. I KNEW there had to be decent people around who would want to hang out with Mike! And I love Harvey, that goes without saying. What a responsible, sweet, cool Dad. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 7 . 11/12/2019 That was a super sweet and poignant chapter. I really loved the moment when Harvey realizes Mike is in his closet crying and the 'I don't know if i'm ready for this' admission. Super sweet and understandable, considering the situation and Mike's past. I also loved the moment when Harvey wanted to speak alone to Mike's parents. A wonderful addition to the story Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 6 . 11/12/2019 That was so impossibly sweet. I gotta say, young insecure Mike is my favorite Mike. But they are all great. I gotta say, when he dropped the mug and freaked out I thought some kind of Jensens related ptsd episode was coming, but this was actually super sad and sweet in a different way. I loved the hug moment and the way they can't quite always deal with their emotions and so they leave notes for eachother instead. So cute. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 5 . 11/12/2019 I felt Harvey's Dad urgency when he got that phone call, how awful to be hours away and know your son needed you. And then the little panic attack...ugh, is there anything better than Harvey in full on Protective!comforting!Dad mode? Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 4 . 11/12/2019 In which, I was also oblivious. It wasn't until Harvey arrived at the apartment and Paul was calling him to the den that I realized what he'd 'picked up' at the airport. And the 'not another word about the tickets' and 'I love you too Mike' Ughhhh, my heart! Harvey is such a good daaaaaad! Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 3 . 11/12/2019 Gotta admit, I totally thought Grammy was gonna die at the end of tbah, but the way you did it was a lot more original and sweet. Glad Grammy didn't die this time around either. I also find it hilarious that everyone refers to the guy as "Henry Morris" and not Henry. Too cute. Punk |
she.a.punk chapter 2 . 11/12/2019 Aww, I loved that, poor sick baby Mike. I am glad we got a little glimpse into the comfort aspect of the nightmares too, one of my favorite fic tropes is after night are comfort. Lol. Such a fan girl. Punk |