interesting way of going about this, i'm assuming that Naruto has the Dragon Dragon Fruit or something along the lines of that because of the title but you know what they say about assuming things. anyways the only issue i have is the length but besides that i don't have much issue, i do hope that you lengthen the chapters if at all possible. until next time!

nice job on this chapter and nice way to make Naruto jack sparrow XD

Update soon

I love it so keep going my friend.

no offence dude but you forget some things like this isnt a manga you need to write a description of fights and what ever a character looks like

i wonder what will happen next?

Naruto akan memiliki buah iblisnya luffy atau mendapat yang lain...?

love the chapter But does naruto have the gomu gomu no mi powers or a different fruits powers.

I like it sofar but are you going to give him luffy's lame rubber power or something cooler I think he should have Logia fruit power something like a storm fruit something like that hope to see a update soon

-_- you add chars in not replace them idiot but other then that 5/10

like narutos attitude, wonder if anything will be different

Interesting let me guess hes going to eat a drago drago devil fruit zoan
Good luck oh and try to make a twist in the time line and will there be a luffy. Also add an of don't take anyone out

Make more chapters

aNothing much happened here but i look forward to the next chapter and the powers that Naruto will show.
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he looks cool