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talita gouveia chapter 19 . 5/16 I love what you did here. You took these characters, and made them your own. I did not feel like I was reading a twilight fanfiction, but a very good and light-hearted book. I'm glad I found this story, and thank you so much for your hard work with it. |
Guest chapter 19 . 3/11 I’ve read this story so many times over the years and it still holds up. The characters are so fully realized and the world you created for them is so vivid. This is one of my favorite fanfics ever so thank you for creating the NBG world. ️️️ |
happyrainshit2 chapter 1 . 8/31/2018 I really like Renee's character in this fic,she's not given a lot of credit most times for raising bella up. one of the BEST Emmet and Bella fanfic story I've ever read. thankssss |
sc4536 chapter 1 . 6/11/2018 I don’t know why I never found this earlier, but this was freaking awesome! I love your version of EmmettBella, I’m always a fan of them together! And I absolutely want my own version of your EmmettLoved this, fantastic work! |
Sgurr Uaran chapter 1 . 4/22/2018 I’ve lost track of how many times I’ve read and re-read this story! It’s my absolutely favourite slice of of life AH fiction :) |
Khyharah chapter 19 . 10/22/2017 ok I have passed this fic many times over the years when I've been searching for a Bella/Emmett fic. I just didn't want an AH ya know? but as I expanded and read more and more AH fics I finally said ok. And boy am I glad. every emotion, every up and down at ATS and the McCarty home was wonderfully written. the relationship with between Bella and Emmett was perfect and timely. even the relationships outside if the main characters were well thought out. everyone felt real to me. I just adore everything above it this. this is definitely going on my faves list. excellent work |
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 1/31/2017 Nice work here |
MrsLMB chapter 1 . 1/21/2017 Great chapter. Bella is really funny. Love the humorous banter between her and Emmett. Hate the mean attitudes, though. Hopefully they'll be nicer toward her as the story progresses. Bella's sure got her work cut out for her. |
PaulIsaHAwttie chapter 19 . 9/12/2016 Such a lovely story... the chapters were uber long... it was great. Really enjoyed its originality |
Ballhsbsvsf chapter 1 . 7/4/2016 I loved it, but I think you used guffawed to many times. |
Kera Atchley chapter 7 . 1/10/2016 They are so cute together! |
Kera Atchley chapter 6 . 1/8/2016 Emmett is such a sweetheart! |
Kera Atchley chapter 5 . 1/8/2016 Fantastic! |
Kera Atchley chapter 4 . 1/7/2016 Excellent! Bella is an amazing person! |
Kera Atchley chapter 3 . 1/7/2016 Amazing! |