I wonder what happens next.

What? A murder? Really? Alice got murdered? What the heck? And now Smith is being called to the case.. what are Nori and Ori going to do? Will they try to sneak out? Will another member sneak in or get lost at another part of town? I can't wait for more!

O.O oh my... now thats suspenseful. What's going to happen? I wan to know. What if it's an orc? (somehow) I'm so curious now. Your story is still amazing. Also, thank you for mentioning me and my story in your earlier chapters. That's was so kind of you and really made my day. I hope to continue to be a good help to you if you ever need.

I love it! I can't wait for the rest of the company to catch up. I wonder if they'll all have new outfits or gadgets with them? Seeing how they'll interact with other people will be fun.

Those two will stay long enough to get used to our way of living. I have a feeling Nori will find out how strong she can be. With a job like her's she knows a thing or two, dear little Nori.

My poor baby Ori fell in the ice cold water! You just had to search that cave didn't you, Nori. When ya come back to your world, Dori will have your ear.

Why do I have a feeling Nori will have a gun pointed to his face. The ever troublesome Nori, what will we do with you little cute starfish.

Why do I have a feeling it's Nori?
This is nice and new.

You're back! You're back! I've missed you!

I really like this story. I've been waitingand hoping you would update... (I'm beginning to make my own little spin off based on this story) You've caputred the chaacter's actions and persnalities perfectly.
It really is nice and capturing. I hope you haven't given up on it

Good chapter.

love them but a few grammer mistakes here and there i dont want this to mean though...
i love your writing style

just a little grammar editing, but I really like this still. can't wait for more.

Great chapter.

very good. too few well written nori fics here. please continue.

Interesting. I'm intrigued as to what will happen next -

Good chapter