Good.

The subtext is my favorite part.

i feel this

Wonderful! I love all of your little escapades into the mind of John Watson. He makes for a fascinating character study.

loved it

I just love the detail and depth you put into your writing and the way you analyze this beautiful friendship!

This is beautiful. Your writing is descriptive and with a rhythmic quality that makes it so compelling to read. :) I love the way these two broken men save each other in so many different ways and together make each other better people. You portray it beautifully here. And it fits perfectly with John's line at the beginning of TAB "I returned to London with my health irretrievably ruined...", which of course becomes even more powerful when you realize later that it's Sherlock in his own mind speaking for his friend. John's battles with depression go so much deeper than what's immediately obvious on the show. Head canon totally accepted.

I love these boys so so much. You... are an AMAZING writer.

So nice to see Sherlock looking out for John on a day to day basis, not just saving his life in the moment

"less black and more robbed of color. Black would have implied feeling anything at all." I'm getting the feeling that this is experience talking, and I'd just like to thank you for being so accurate, because it IS very accurate. It means a lot to me. DFTBA.
-Clare Hope

Loved it! !

Good writing, as always.

Lovely study, and perfect ending.

This was a good description of depression. Very well written.

wow nice