Damn

I really like how you write the gods. Crazy manipulators or lonely powerful dieties. It's a very refreshing take on it!

wow. I cried too much in this story. good work I love the lay out and the relationships between each character. good work!

I'm disappointed in the ending, but I still really enjoyed this story. It's a shame you lost your inspiration for this pairing

Fuck I'm crying

'if any god would get with a psychopath I figure it would be Apollo' omg I can't stop laughing. Though I do have to disagree with you (I'd place Ares as more likely) I found it hilarious the way you put it

Love this fanfic but I hate that you make Nico what Percy should be, taller, better at fighting, stronger etc.
There's way too many idiots with great writing styles but always making Nico Top for example Takara Pheonix

I am so mad at the same time the ending kind of fits. I don't even know . Great job on making me cry.

I...I have no words...you've ruined me. There better be a sequel where Percy comes back or I'll...I'll... I'll do something.

R u British

Kidnap him and he just helps he's not even a little mad

Reyna comes of as kind of a Bitch in this story what gives her the right to tell anyone what to do and act like the boss
Also Annabeth is just annoying her to in this story her and Reyna belong together, also she needs to stop accusing people of lying when their telling the truth

Damn. Even in an alternate universe Percy fell into Tartarus with Annabeth.

But I like sadistic Percy. Awwww...

First things first: I loathe you for killing Sally.
Secondly: I actually have read this story before but I think at the time it was incomplete because I remember up to a point and then after that everything was unfamiliar.
Lastly: Great job! This was really well done! The ending was a pity but overall I enjoyed it.