I love this fic! Kinda short but really nice and fun, and i would love to read more.

Please... Do more * *

funny, interesting, cute, unique.. and ORIGINAL! God I love it! please update soon! I want to know what will happen to the two! and how will nature take it's course.. you're a really good writer.. and your ideas were all spicy! the only flaw in this was the short chapters.. please make it longer.. because I was like "aww.. done so soon?" so yeah.. but over all, it was excelent.. keep up the good work!

please update soon! it was really interesting and I want to know what will happen next! _

niceee! Im getting excited for the next chapter! But please make longer chapters!

So cute please continue

So, here I go.
That was cute, but the chapter could be longer u.u please try to describe more the scene, but my God, I love how screams with him lol

Another tip: careful with the period and the comma, you should include them more.

Gimme the next chapter, pretty please *u*

OH MY GLOB!
Please post more, I really want to see that! It seens so cool!
Pleeeeease *puppy eyes*