me, imagining the pokemon capture music: Pokemans

“DYNAMIC ENTRY”

Lololol this is gold~

Fucking garbage, absolute complete garbage

i think it would have worked with Vivi and Croc in one Crew barely long enough to not have that whole thing blown up if you have Vivi either leave temp. like (Usopp did) and she came back a few days before murdering Croc or if you make her really snappy/aggressive at Croc and Nathan for allowing Croc to stay. Then a few days later shes just happy go lucky with a dangerous undercurrent and you write it so that we know she made up her Mind with something dangerous (murdering him and reading up on his DF and have the apropriate Fruit nearby for switch)

This entire story is retarded

Too bad it's over. Although his story literally changed my vision of what a self insert should be. His character was literally the first I saw that literally simply spoke fuck the canon. After that I was really thinking of doing a fic with an SI with elements of devil survivor, if you do not mind, of course, that was your idea. I just need to get the courage to write, my writing sucks, I hope it gets better one day. Either way, that was epic while it lasted. Nath was an interesting SI.

Sad to see this go, was a really great adventure. But having abandoned my own OP fic, I can completely understand.
Thanks for writing this far and also for introducing me to the persona franchise it's really fun games lol. Only played one to the end so far though.
Wish you best of luck in the next one and hope it's just as great or better

...Sniff

*Starts playing the bag-pipes, while a 21 guns salute goes off in the background.*

Well, more than a year since the last update, so I consider it abandoned. It was a good read.
Only one thing: You said no in the first chapter, but this is definitely what I consider a crossover.

well then this is one of the beter fan fics iv seen with beter ocs than most Nathan is a bad-ass and i am hungry. hopeing for more bye for now

All his plans going awry and he doesn't even have access to any vices, poor boy
Are they five year olds giggling about indirect kisses or is this some obscure custom they're referencing?
Wow, it's getting real. Kinda feel sad Nick didn't make first mate but I'm curious about who it is Nath has planned for the position. He isn't planning to steal any future Strawhats is he?

Hehe I kinda hoped the Bounty Brothers would join Nath and the fact that Luffy plans to follow and help is awesome, damn I want them back together

This Luffy is really sad, just when I was starting to really like him and not just the Luffy's in name only.
The Devil Arm sounds like it could be interesting even if it's currently more trouble than it's worth

That was hard but realistic. Honestly Luffy's shonen hero way of getting through troubles with the power of belief and friendship just doesn't match the feel of the fic so Nathan kinda needs to do what he does (even though maybe tone it down a little like with Arlong) but I get why Luffy wouldn't be happy about it. Especially with the way Luffy planned to get them all killed on the last island, he gets better but even in canon in this part of the story he was held up by Zoro and plot armour. Seems weird to just leave him to it but I suppose I get that Nathan can't just bow his head and pretend to be cowes, wonder how it'll affect the crew. Guessing Nick'll follow him

Vivi's so Tsundere...