Eeeeeer... why did this end here? It’s 2019 and I have had this in my followed folder all this time and it’s unfinished?
... I’m sad.

This is honestly one of the best fics I've ever read, but when I saw that you haven't updated it since 2013, l was devestated! I really hope you'll one day continue this amazing story! Kudos!

Oh man, you could be so close to finishing this, but I doubt it will happen since you last updated in 2013...

Still, it's a great story. I'm usually pretty skeptical when people bring in their own original characters since man of them fall flat and either become Mary/Gary Sues or remain thin as cardboard, but you've done a great job with Merlin's Magicians. You made each one unique with clearly different backgrounds and stories.

You also have room to develop Morgana's character using her relationship with Martin. How long has it been since Morgana had a friend, a real friend? Even before her first death she was a lone for a large portion of her life. Even her sister at times used her to obtain a goal. It would be a nice bit of tragic writing if Morgana had grown to actually like and care for Martin and didn't want to lose him. You've got a brickwork for this in place already, now you just need to highlight it a little bit.

The only thing I would change about this story is the romance thing with Author and Merlin. It just seems very sudden and underdeveloped. Turning their friendship into a romance tends to undermine their friendship and makes it less, I think.

Anyway, awesome job. I hope you update and finish this off, but I can understand how difficult it can be picking up an old story again. Thanks for posting!

Put up the next chapter! I really like your style of writing... This is putting a whole new twist on the story for me,

Alright, this is me BEGGING for you to complete this story. I have been reading your stories all day, but this one is by far my favorite. BEGGING

Humor/Drama, more like humor and drama and HOLY FUCKING HELL LOOK AT ALL THIS ANGST, I'M CRYING, these boys are just beautiful in every way. God Arthur, must you break my heart every time it's your POV.

Bravo and revenge is everyone's favorite dish, regardless of how it's served.

I NEED MORE

YAY Merlin's back!

LOVE this and aaawww! Looking forward to more!

Beautiful scene, there. Well done. Though now I'm a bit worried about what Morgana will lead Dan to do.

OMFG! Best chapter Ever! Merthur! Awesome! Love this Story So F* * * ing much! Sadotf see it End soon but Can't wait to see What'll happen!

...Fascinating. You got the Merthur in veeery sneakily, but it does fit the story here.
Seems to me like Morgana is taking Dan in... Yikes...

YAH! Merlin's back! Loved the way that happened. No big fireworks or major breakdown of the mind as the memories came crashing back, etc, etc.

Simple, sweet, loving. Was very nice...

Morgana contradicted herself in this though. LOL telling Dan his powers wouldn't work on her but then telling him he can do it to anyone magic or not. Wonder if he'll catch it under the duress of being held by her.

Ahh I love it! Already desperate for the next chapter!