I really enjoy this! I hope you come back to it!

Please update! We want you back!

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Awesome story. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Are you going to update its 2018?

Please update this is my favorite story on this site

This was amazing you must update.

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Great story so far, PLEASE update!

The whole spat between the different Mandalorian factions is quite interesting. The New Mandalorian faction's total pacifist ideals are clearly flawed and remind me of the New Republic's pacifist attitude in the "canon" star wars universe post-Endor with similarly disastrous results. While Death Watch's conquering other planets ideals are wrong too, they at least want to build up Mandalore's military to better protect their people. In the end, the two factions are united by the True Mandalorians who serve as a bridge between them as they want to build up Mandalore's military BUT they don't want to have their people conquer other races, it's quite fitting.

Seeing the Mandalorians smash the CIS's forces was impressive and served notice that they shall not be pushed around anymore by anyone. I like how their commander /whose a lot like Patton and I enjoyed reading his speech/ handed the Nemoidian general over to the captured Nimbus commandos who beat and stabbed him to death. I also like the idea of the Mandalorians helping the people of Jabim regain their freedom and become independent of either the CIS or the Republic. If the Republic helps in the liberation of Jabim, please have Anakin take part as he'll want to right an error made when he was forced to leave his loyalist allies behind to save his clone troops. The people of Jabim can still be angry with him of course.

As for the investigation, I'm glad you changed it so that Bariss is NOT the one behind it all and that Ahsoka hasn't been framed and having most of the Jedi disowning her. That whole thing was so goddamned stupid and made the Jedi and the Republic look like a bunch of jerks. Whoever is behind it looks to me is from a faction of Sith not related to Dooku or even Sidious, perhaps an offshoot of an earlier faction of Sith from ancient times.

Glad to see Zey in a fic - good character work!

what's with the Batman ripoff? because honestly, its causing me to lose my interest in this story. if i wanted to read a batman story, i'd go to the batman section.

nice patton quote. why did you have Jango refer to Kal as buir though? you realize that meas father, right?

i also figured you'd have one of your OC's, that Galik guy, becme Mandlore, not Jango.

also, why in the hell would you use the dna of Cassus Fett for a clone template? he's the sorriest excuse for a mandalorian in their entire history.

still an interesting story, though i am a little disappointed by the inclusion of Jango. like i said, he's scum. hell, even in your story he's a piece of crap who abandoned his son.

interesting story so far. i'm a fan of the mandalorians as well. unless they're a Fett, anyway, Fett are scum.