| Reviews for Brother, My Brother |
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   SSJRikudou chapter 2 . 3/11 his pokemon are 1. horrible but that's your preference as annoying as it is. and 2, NOT FOUND IN KANTO. WHERE HE IS. So how does he have them? His is a Monferno NOT an Infernape after atleast 2 years of training? |
| Bladedrake101 chapter 2 . 9/30/2018 a good strong open. also, my response, to the sudden appearance of an old man, in my house (if I was HarryHoly Houndoom! Seviper, Iron Tail!" |
| multiyman37 chapter 1 . 9/14/2018 Can you do a rewrite that includes fairy types |
| Stormy1x2 chapter 2 . 7/24/2018 I really wanna comment but Im simply stuck... Augusta Shadow? Really? |
| lonewolf420 chapter 1 . 3/22/2018 Good first chapter. Only thing I might have changed is making Harry have his godfather's name as his middle not the traitor. |
| Guest chapter 13 . 12/5/2017 OCs... /grumbles |
| SomeNobody chapter 11 . 12/5/2017 Didn't you write in earlier chapter that Harry didn't like brooms? Why is he so excited to see quidditch? |
| Jostanos chapter 14 . 10/15/2017 Suicune? |
| Jostanos chapter 4 . 10/15/2017 Missing (No.) or wrong words used in a sentence concerning Hagrid. |
| Jostanos chapter 1 . 10/15/2017 "James II (Too)"? Sirius-ly? |
| Uzushiogakure chapter 1 . 10/8/2017 Great another one of these retarded ass fan fic |
| Lord'o'Llamas chapter 20 . 9/1/2017 Write more plz |
| IJustWannaReadEpicStories chapter 13 . 7/14/2017 You are seriously messing up the Timelines. You can't send out Froakie and not have Fairy Pokemon at the same time. |
| IJustWannaReadEpicStories chapter 8 . 7/14/2017 You have a lot of spelling mistakes that is Fandom based. I heavily suggest that you RESEARCH before you start writing. Pokemon names, Hogwarts Spells and so on. The mark of a Sucessful writer is Researching the subjects you are writing about. If you don't, it doesn't just shame you as a Writer, but the Subjects as well. |
| ChimaTigon chapter 20 . 6/28/2017 What about a rewrite? |
