Do you hear me? Talking to you? Across the water across the deep blue ocean~ under the open sky, oh my, please author update! Lucky Im in love with this story, lucky to have read what you've update, but then it stops and cause my heartbreak. Please -san, update this story. Update soon and may you have a great life. Thanks and ciao

This is a very good story continue please

In love again :) I always refresh my updates hoping this series would pop up but it's okay. You're busy and this is great. Thank you for the great chapter! I can't wait for the update!

Please update soon. This is on of my favourite fanfics so far. I do hope u will update soon, thx :)

thanks for this nice story... hoping to see more updates in the future hehehe... :p

Continue...this is rather interesting. It's also, in my opinion, quite original! It really is wonderful and I'd be over joyed if you continued,.

Awesome chapter! Looking so forward to read the next chapter! :)

Well, well, well.

I like this so far.

Keep up the good work.

ZR };-

So far so good! Please update soon...hope they don't find out about Fate anytime soon...

O.o Fate is such a badass! She stood up for Nanoha and did a pretty amazing job getting through that course with 0 experience!

omg this chapter had me constantly edging on my seat the whole time reading it . Fate is truly amazing for overcoming those lethal traps despite having 0 experience at all lol So much love for her!

ahhhh and one more thing I love about this chapter: its angstiness. LLOLL I'm a sucker for anything angsty so I did not feel disappointed or whatsoever :] The way you portray Nanoha and Fate's characters are simple but it conveys so much raw emotions within me. Love it.

Thank you for yet another great chapter and please update soon! I wanna see some lovey-dovey scenes between our protagonists already haha.

i enjoyed this chapter the only thing i may say imm confused is that WHAT KIND OF ARMY IS THAT! lol risking the lives of their recruits with that supermegaultra extreme training camp! i just think the punishment was too crazy, but still i really liked it keep it up

Every thing is clear now, hope Fate is fine, thank for the chapter, update soon

please continue! hmm... everything is good.. but theres something missing.. i dont know what.. i guess you need to add more explanation or actions or add more drama.. cant explain it.. i just mean since fate is suffering you need more to explain the actions for the reader to have a feel.. like putting the reader in fate's place (dont know what im saying) Dont take it to heart though i already like it the way it is.. but i thinking adding a bit more makes it better. Im just a reader though..

What?! Who uses magic on Fate?! Who? Ah I want to know!

But hey, great chapter! Fate finally revealed (to herself) who she is! Kind of, just a not but it was still something!

And man! That training course is terrifying! I hope Fate is okay. And I hope Nanoha is can mend their friendship.

This fic is getting more and more intriguing! I really can't wait to see what the really plot is. Precia is up to something again isn't she? I can't wait to read more! Update again!