Good story! Read it through in one night.

wow

Soooooooo...
for anyone that likes fatestay night due to how GAR archer is and the details of his weapons then...

this story is not for you..

of all the archer/shiro versions out, at first i was glad to find someone used my favorite version the fate extra version... the one that didnt regret his ideals and looks back at his experiences in a good light..

but i know that archer/fateextra is less cynical than other versions but in this story
he just acts like a lovesick virgin for godfreakingsakes...
there are no manly GAR archer in this...
at first chapters it tells that he has finished the grailwar in fate/extra but when he got summoned his personality turned into the emiya shirou of the first fatestay night anime...
that just got me thinking wutdufuq..

but i still read on... thats how much i liked fate stay night i was hoping that maybe later on ill get to see the points in him that made me idolize archer... but sadly nope

honestly the only time i see archer act like this in when he a master orders him something ridiculous and uses a command seal.
even the emiya pre archer character acts less like this even when in love...
so i hate you for that but nonetheless

this is a good story, you writing is great as i never really felt that i wasnt in the fate universe or nasuverse..

but really you need to improve on how to properly portray character personalities as some feel forced.

i wont forgive you for butchering my favorite archer version but hey kudos for writing a story..
i cant write one because of fear of doing what you just did

this was awesome... i very much enjoyed it

I really, really Love this story! I've read it a lot and it never gets tiring, Great job!

This was pretty much one of the best stories I've read :)

AWW this was a great story and now onwards to the sequel now.

So much fluff - so much, and so awesome fluff.
Gonna love that much. And you did put thought into the fic and all till the end.
There are loopholes here and there - especially how Rin was /so/ eager to help like an NPC.
Mooncell Hikaru is aw so awesome.
Will be totally following your Gil fic too.

till the next time
-regards
wrathie

The hearts of Archer & Hikaru become one

Wonderful ending wonderful story

Lancer why?

The dense ones are always the cutest

Yay!

cool story

Read all of this in one go. Great job! Look forward to more of your works.