| Reviews for Missing son |
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   EmperorGhoul chapter 3 . 5/4 I really dont like books with the idea of making Lily and James not pay attention to their son. I just don't understand. |
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/18 The idea isn't terrible, but your writing and execution is just horrifyingly bad. |
| George1892 chapter 7 . 10/29/2019 Quite a good story overall. |
| redbob141 chapter 7 . 8/17/2019 I really hope that you at some point comeback to this or do a re-write of the idea. The new ways that you had Harry cast from the Potter's and making his slight neglect more the public's fault than Lily and James was a welcome change and not something that I've seen before. Even moreso, that Harry isn't filled with Hate, dead emotionally, or starved for their love was a nice change for WBWL stories or when Harry is neglected; instead, you have him go through the grieving process at first he was angry and driven now while he does want an answer why it doesn't drive him. One thing that was odd was that the Potters didn't try to talk to Harry after the goblet. While no bad as there are plenty of reasons why one might not want to it should be noted and dealt with. Doing otherwise would be unsatisfying to readers. There are some problems with sentences that should be fixed but are not so bad as to affect the enjoyment of the story, All together a very well written piece both from a technical side and literary side of things that I hope to see completed one day. |
| Djayden chapter 7 . 5/23/2019 i hope you update this story soon! |
| Jimhh chapter 7 . 3/15/2019 This is a really good story, I wish you would continue with it, as james was under the imperious curse when he disinherited harry, is different, as there was no real intent behind it, so what effect would it have if harry was brought back into the family, would it stabilize his magic, would his magic increase, or be more refined, oh so many possibilities. Keep writing as I like to read. Thank you |
| Swordking chapter 7 . 3/4/2019 Hi this is great please continue this can’t wait to read mor |
| gginsc chapter 7 . 2/12/2019 I like this story and am sorry you abandoned it. Please reconsider. |
| Time Emperor chapter 1 . 2/17/2018 I love it! This must continue! |
| lsignet chapter 7 . 2/8/2018 this is great! love the story line, hope he reconnects with family due to my understanding that they did not know they did it. |
| Vash Eater chapter 7 . 12/1/2017 I looked for a Harry/Penelope story on a whim and found this gem. Please consider continuing! |
| Gostwolf92 chapter 7 . 6/17/2017 It a great story |
| WhiteEagle1985 chapter 7 . 4/15/2017 An amazing story here! Looking forward to reading more! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 4/9/2017 plese come back soon |
| natrat2406 chapter 7 . 2/9/2017 Next chapter should be the potters trying to reconnect with harry and the firs task |
