EXCELLENT story. I loved it! :)))

finished in one night ... this story though kinda cliché it might be .. there are still some really interesting plot lines with Thom and Alanna :) and the writing is pretty good :D Write on o/ Cheers

Like it.

Great great story. Its 12:20 and I have to wake up at 6 but I couldnt stop reading! Your really talented.

This is a nice story- I'm glad Alanna's starting to make friends. Especially Gary. He seemed cool in the books. And I feel like you've got Jonathan down.

But do you realize you've made George about 50? Middle-aged?

I loved this, but you never did write the sequel. You just started rewriting this story.

This was hilarious and hard for me to read, when I read embarrassing scenes I try to skip over them but usually they're important so I have to read them. Not that it's bad or anything, I'm just weird that way.

Ah, yes. Good going. One thing I noticed, however, (sorry going to be nitpicky here), is that you keep on writing "Jonathon", when the correct spelling is in fact "Jonathan". Other than that, I didn't notice any immediate spelling and/or grammtical errors.

One of my new favorite stories and pairings, so thank you!

I myself would never have thought of Alex/Alanna but you've made it work well.

*Pounce'sStarlet*

I love it!

It's my new favourite fic!

Well done!

Just to tell you, it's not lady Cythea, it's actually lady Cythera - I should know: I'm re-reading the SotL series for like the 11th time right now!

I luff your story though!

Don't make Alex and Alanna/s relationship mess up! I know I said to make Jon an ass, but not that much!

You just now figured it out? That avra Kedavra is Abracadabra?

Please don't let this story be A/J just let Jon continue to be a pompous ass and let it remain A/A

You seriously have to learn the deffinition of a cliffhanger.