Wow! What teamwork you guys accomplished with this story~! And an AU with the Testarossa twins . . . dang! That's very creative indeed! I just love this twincest story that you guys came up with for this series. I also love Alicia growing so attached with Fate. Or so that's how she is from Nanoha A's. So, I'm glad you took that personality and added a little something into that story.

Very cute story, Mikey-kun~!

Weird but lovely

*O* OMG...

I still like NanoFate but this was good.

Keep it up.

ZR };-

LoL interesting; i have to say i like this XD

Interesting take on those two and I found the way that Alicia acted around Fate all possessive a bit amusing. Good job on keeping Fate in-character. (Her acting so innocent at times is just...kawaii).

Too bad there won't be an M rated version of this, new rules and all that. Because you write pretty decent smut. And because there isn't too much Alicia-Fate interaction or smut in this fandom.

Whoa. At first when I read this I was like "But Alicia doesn't act like that! She's supposed to be sweet and gently and...and...!" but then I read further and Alicia being possessive I started to like. Nanoha should still be there though. good work :)

I normally don't give reviews but I decided to do so for this story ... So let’s see what we have here.

Hrm, there is really one problem I see with this story, it is however a nit-pick of an otherwise interestingly different story. The nit-pick is that all of the paragraphs I have read in this story, most of them do not have any periods throughout the paragraphs. This is kind of annoying but not really a problem to read through/over if you are interested in reading to the end.

Aside from that little problem, I am seeing no other problems that come out in my eyes. The Story is written well, aside from the nit-pick above and it is an interesting take if the NanohaVerse was different and both Fate and Alicia where twins that where naturally born. The fact that it is Twincest also caught my eye and I did enjoy the quick read. The only thing that I am really only concerned that is if Alicia is Yandere for Fate ... at least give Nanoha a piece.

Overall: A Decent Read, it's a little on the short side but it dose not try and pad itself out for length or anything.

-Glexen

You did a good job. Never forget what Ive told you, yeah?

Note; I still dislike MGLN.

But Ill be here to help you, should you need it.

Regards
- GrimGrave

Salutations.

Nice fic it would be interesting to read one larger fic about this two And nanoha a love triangule it would be great XD