WOW, very emotional.

So loved this story. Edward got his dream but Bella was in hell. She trusted her father and friend and they both lied to her. She found her daughter and then Edward. It was a family in the making. So loved the ending.

Bella went through hell. Her father did her so bad.

Edward is an exceptional man!

Thank you for the detailed information in this part of the story. How could Charlie do that? I don't blame Bella for throwing a fit. If I were going to be so cruel, I would have put the folder in a bank safety deposit box. But what does the Bible say? It says that hidden things will become known. How could a religious man could be so cruel? Well, he was from a different era when people considered it right to judge, and forget about charity. He should have considered that we all sin, and his daughter's sin (in his eyes) was made from love. His attitude has cost him his grandchild and a connection to any other grandchildren that he might have in the future. Karma hit again!

More of my weekend in your box. Fantastic and original idea.

So love your stories about this little family. Hope one day you will write more about them!

Vous me faites pleurer, c'est tellement touchant.

Si touchant!

I know I shouldn't have read this just yet but I couldn't resist. There is just so much pain and uncertainty for both Bella and Edward. I see both sides so clearly, yet hurt for them both. I don't know if this story goes this way but those two really need one another.

Marley is so lucky to have Edward as her daddy. And Bree was kind and compassionate. I think I smiled while reading this chapter. :)

Hearing her side of how badly she was treated by her father and her best friend was unbelievably sad. How either of them could've done that to her is beyond my thought process. Her father disgusted me with his holier than though comments. He'd rather his own daughter suffer the way she's been suffering, than let her have her child. My stomach actually hurts for how she was treated. If he had never been hurt, she would've never found out. Not until h passed away and she had to go through this paperwork then. Marley could've been a mother herself by the time that happened. Kate, that one is mind boggling too. I'm glad she disowned both of them.

This was a fantastic glimpse into him picking her up from 'the garden'. What a sweet way to share that with us.

Love reading this awesome job!

Love reading this. I am wondering if the bald headed cop that was at the hospital was Bella's dad.