I loved this story so much. I loved watching Draco and Astoria fall in love and watching their kids grow up

We are talking about Draco Malfoy.. like Malfoy Draco? With a job as a waiter? hahahahaha what about this fic? Romance/Friendship? Or Fantansy? What did you do with this character? You killed him haha..and for a moments I feel like I am reading a girl and not man... poor Draco.

Absolutely beautiful story. Thank you for this glimpse into the Malfoys!

This was such an incredible story. absolutely loved it. Not only was it fun and entertaining, it was also very heartfelt. Astoria and Draco made a lovely couple that I could totally relate to. And well, I am not a parent but I feel like you captured the parent/child relationship really well too.

Hello LindsayC173,
I was terribly intrigued when I looked at the pairing, I'll admit freely. Yes, I love the idea of them, more so maybe because they were not much talked of in the canon. But what you've done over here...it blew my expectations. Draco Malfoy is one of my best loved characters, most so because of the curious complexities revolving around him. The gradual transformation of him from what he was at the beginning, and what he is at the end of chapter 26, is what blew my mind. Wow. I never saw THIS good a patient undertaking of character sketching before. The emotions, the communications, the entire realism, nothing-too-outstanding made me fall in love with this story. I applaud you for this. Rarely do I get to read any more stories like this, and I want to stay, your story radiated a hope for us folks who find ourselves in Draco Malfoy. It's good to know that even those who can't be epic heroes, have writers such as you for them to talk of them. Very, very well done, indeed. Thanks for the fic, as a fellow writer, I learnt a LOT from it. Keep writing such marvelously!
Regards,
PotterForPresident1997

My husband actually proposed in the rain... it's something I'll never forget. I was so stunned I forgot how to talk for a few minutes and he was pitifully sad waiting for my answer. I loved reading this proposal because it reminds me of my own. Thank you

REALY? She thought they had had sex!?

Good, you did a nice job

I really like the story so far! You're writing style is great & everything but the on and off italic formatting you're using for Astoria's POV is kinda off putting and makes the story less enjoyable ;u;

I know it's supposed to be for affect and everything but the story would be a lot easier to read if everything was just without italics, because the italics make me feel like I'm reading a flashback and it makes it hard for me to concentrate.

That's just a suggestion though! The story is great so far.

This was amazing, beautiful, exquisite! one of the best I've ever read! love a good happy ending, really well done for this amazing story and thank you for sharing it with us :)

Great work! :)

Lots of fluff, but incredibly well-written...it was definitely one of my more enjoyable reads. Great job!

Its beautiful, this story. I love Astoria, and I also agree that she would 'mend' Draco as such. I love that they are in love, because I've read so many stories where it was an arranged marriage and the pair did not get on. I loved how they didn't think the other was perfect, which makes the story for me seem more real. I loved it all.
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wow this story was amazing! i love it!

Aww. This was so cute and I had so much fun reading it!