This is actually really sad ( Poor Rido .. .) but it's an awesome story , don't worry you captured the feeling of becoming insane well . Good job , keep it up !
lazyass out !

Rido seems to be showing symptoms of schizophrenia.

This is very well written. I like it.

I love the writing style, adding the shadow thing to this was a nice touch. :) absolutely loved this.

Ah... Rido. The dark, bloodthirsty antagonist of vampire knight. He will ALWAYS be my favorite character :D

Review time! I really liked the way you portrayed Rido's fall to insanity, describing the shadow that constantly haunts him, constantly is present, whispering promises of sins and vengeful plots, and finally, consuming him. It really was a good jab at describing his descent, and makes a nice side piece to Eternal, showing the point of view of a character that is not given a whole lot of voice (Point of view wise), in Eternal, although he is an integral part of the story, we seem him only through the eyes of other characters. Quite refreshing! Keep up the good work!

DarkWings out

I love your writing style!

Wow... Just wow.
It's giving me the chills but it also could be the background story of Rido. It's amazing!