| Reviews for A Dream That's Barely Half Awake |
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TimeLordLexi chapter 19 . 2/17 Wow. It's been a little over a year since I wrote my last comment on your AO3, and I have just re-read the whole thing and I found myself as in awe now as I was back then. my friend, you are a seriously seriously talented writer. You mentioned having started revisions on stuff you've written and I was wondering what your plans were with this one? I'm still as excited to see where you take this and again, no pressure at all. I just absolutely adore your writing. all the best xoxox and as always, wanting to find out where you take our girls xxx |
somethingthatismine chapter 2 . 11/7/2019 omg i couldn't keep still reading truth or dare when chloe was guessing the person beca has a crush on. it's like watching a blindfolded person getting closer to the piñata. slapping-the-person-beside-me stuff. dude! - BITHC AJAHSGAJAGWUSBQJSHHAKAAHAKAJABSJAJAHAHAHAHAHAAJAHAHAHAHAJJA I DIED - okay now that i've calmed down a littlenshsjhjwjd chloe only realized when beca gave the dare that it was her? who was she thinking when she asked if it was a former bella? aubrey? |
somethingthatismine chapter 19 . 9/6/2019 truth or dares are always the best and it was even better that beca made the first move. i think i strained my heart with the push and pull that is chapter 3. you never know where it's going, what beca's final decision was going to be. i was so sure she's gonna break up with jesse when she called him but then it seemed like she was stalling and i didn't know if she was having second thoughts. im so grateful that she chose chloe tho. im happy that you opted not to have them go thru LDR tho im a little surprised since i thought that was what their summer was building towards, like the thought was they were only gonna have this summer and have to be apart when it's over. thank you for not giving us that angst XD chloe's mourning for her mom and beca's dad being an ass provided enough in that department. i also liked that you gave beca a strong relationship with her mom even if she's away because without that she wouldn't have anyone else, unlike chloe who has both aubrey and matt. im really looking forward to chloe meeting beca's mom and how that will happen. i thought it was silly at first that beca thought chloe wouldn't know her birthday, like, after years of knowing each other until i remembered that chloe actually graduated in this one :D you left with a not-cliffhanger though. i really wanna know what happened with that weekend especially after you've been building up chloe's surprise since that hood night chapter |
Sedgewix chapter 1 . 4/10/2019 come back! this story is amazing! |
Guest chapter 19 . 11/13/2018 Sooo good! |
Pitchfan chapter 19 . 10/27/2018 Wow sex every chapters |
Guest chapter 19 . 8/8/2018 It has a lot of sex, which is goooood! But most importantly, it is a great story. You can see the love they have for each other and also the way you described it... soo awesome. I hope you continue writting :) |
DJDomonique22 chapter 19 . 4/24/2018 Keep writing! This is really good...don't stop |
PyxisCetus chapter 19 . 12/30/2017 This story is still amazing! |
reader-139 chapter 1 . 10/23/2017 Otherwise this is good |
reader-139 chapter 1 . 10/23/2017 You spelt pulgogi wrong. It’s bulgogi. |
Courtney chapter 19 . 7/17/2017 Please update this is amazing |
Liltoxic chapter 19 . 2/15/2017 Holy hell...! Amazing! Please update soon! Awesome writing! |
TheBecaMitchelFan chapter 1 . 2/14/2017 whoa.. there's a lot of sex .. |
HellomynameisAshley chapter 19 . 11/23/2016 so much sex... |