Reviews for The Haircut |
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Jenny chapter 1 . 1/14/2017 So cute *sobs in corner* |
MiniMouse chapter 1 . 12/30/2015 SoCute |
Eli Foxworth chapter 1 . 8/28/2015 argh sweetest thing- QuQ thank you for this adorable fic. |
Edhla chapter 1 . 7/25/2013 This is SUCH an adorable piece :D I was grinning almost the whole time. There were a few things that dragged me out of the moment- "Justin Bieber" was one. I know what you're trying to describe, but perhaps you could express it in a more visual way without the reference? Maybe a thought. The kissing I didn't know how to feel about. One minor error: ["As I'll ever be," Rain replied with a lack of conviction, "Let's go."] If there's a capital for "Let's", then there should be a period/full stop after "conviction." Hope this helps. Thank you for writing this x |
Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2013 This is perfect. I love the way you portrayed them. |
Lilla chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 I liked thi a lot. It would be so cool to see it drawn in manga. Very creative too |
Ms Marvel98 chapter 1 . 3/10/2013 Woo! First person to review! Aw yiss! Anyway this was really cute! My favourite line? - "Promise we'll get through this together," He whispered. "Rain, it's only hair. It grows back. Besides, you could use a new look." Let's face it, he DOES need a haircut! Cute one-shot :) |