Reviews for Damaged Bodies, Growing Lives, Building Families
Marleen1702 chapter 21 . 4/15
Hello. I LOVE your storys and I‘m so happy that you Write crossovers with the Avengers and Harry Potter. (But my favorit are still The Rise of Drackens, THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THAT STORY) You have my support and that from Many Others too !️Your Fans are in different countrys too, for example myself from GermanyMay I ask a question? I‘m totally a dumbass and a little desperate, because I dont know,where to find your other AvengersxHarryPotter Storys and I am dying to read them!I know so far only about this FF, the Iron-Bound and HarryxFury. Maybe I am blind, but where can I find the other ones you inform us about ?
Zoha-Lixue chapter 1 . 4/11
Honestly, I love your writing style. You are an amazing author but by all that is holy I hate nearly every Harry you have written. Harry is nearly always a whiny, toxic, and downright spoiled brat. Yes, he goes through some stuff. Most of the time being dramatic is needed to get his point across. But he goes above and beyond what is considered normal levels of hysteria.
Take this story for example. He gets angry for them not telling him what happened. That is awesome. But then he goes and tells someone else and sits back as they threaten everyone. As though he can't do anything on his own. Then he goes shopping and gets angry because people are concerned about him. He is pregnant and hurt. So why, just why, would he be insulted by their concern when he has proven himself to be incompetent at caring for himself. He doesn't eat, he barely sleeps, he was recently kidnapped where the captors haven't been caught yet. So why does he think that it is ok to do what he does and why are we as readers expected to take his side. I get his situation but I hate him.

You write some amazing stories but I can't read your stuff without wanting to bash my head into a wall over you annoying way of writing Harry.
stacyleedam25 chapter 21 . 3/23
Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next
uzieh chapter 1 . 1/13
hawkeye has wife and kids
Wolvie26 chapter 21 . 10/15/2019
Love it!
Child of Dreams chapter 21 . 8/29/2019
If Harry has a third child, I recommend the name Elliott for a boy and Elizabeth for a girl...
Child of Dreams chapter 15 . 8/29/2019
Well, 3 months of PMS with no period can't possibly be worse than 8 months of PMS with no period...
It's so bad I'm to the point praying I get my period soon before I end up killing someone!
silver.blast96 chapter 5 . 8/23/2019
Justifying rape? Wow real cool
Pennieyoung chapter 21 . 8/17/2019
Wonderful story, thank you for sharing it with us:)
Gloria chapter 1 . 5/5/2019
Sometimes it feels like you get off on making Harry incompetent. Harry is weak, weak, weak, stupid, weak, incompetent and weak
Mike Lu chapter 1 . 3/26/2019
I am put off by the summary. I have no problem with SLASH. I don't like it but also I don't hate it. I am just indifferent little on the "avoid" side but when there's rape and child involved, I hate it. Probably those who likes such topic will read but I will not.
Mike Lu chapter 1 . 3/26/2019
Can a man cocieve a child? I mean literally and not adopted. And don't just use the excuse magic, it's pathetic.
0sleep chapter 21 . 3/17/2019
You had a tape victim get together with his rapist and over the course of the story proceeded to destroy every connection Harry had with his past as well as making him suffer unwanted interventions and advances.

I find it sad that you destroy a well written story with the idea that forced bonding can be romantic or that rape can be resolved in the manner you showed.

You have talent with writing, but made some very poor choices with story direction.
silver.blast96 chapter 1 . 3/8/2019
Terrible first impression. Solid thumbs down
HoneyBear84 chapter 21 . 12/17/2018
Loved it and can't wait to read more of ur stories and updates
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