this was a fking great story, I read this flat out twice in a row.

Cute story! You captured their dialogue very well.

OMG, I was laughing so hard while reading the last chapter!
Seriously, please write more like this! ️️️

See once again all about danny i was right another predictable story im out no fun reading stories easy to predic

How about danny be taken to the hospital like we all know steve Would do can already see hiw this is gonna go wuth danny hurt ugh another bullshit story already about danny and making steve look a bad friend for not taking danny to the hospital so we can already see dannys probably gonna get worse over time because he hasn't been checked up unbelievable

Awww danny hurt yet again no suprise there i was waitting for ut because its soo predictable that his always the one getting hurt or when others get hurt too dannys always the one worse of and main focus

I wouldn't mind being Kono when she and Loir were taking care of Danny after the earthquake. Would love to see his bear chest/muscles.

Wow ! what a day when the team was checking up on buildings/areas.
loved the hardware chase. And Danny getting the bad guys with tools and then wheeling them on a wheelbarrow

This was so much fun and yet had great action too. Love all the heroics of Danny and there was even some Danny whump. Wonderful. The Danny/Steve argument about the icy was a classic. Great story.

This was great!

Awesome. Loved it. Always loved earthquake stories. :)

-EmpressAkitla

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That's okay. I have nothing against Lori-

(Except that she takes time away from the original four. And that every other new addition to the show seems to be replacing the bromance with their own stuff. I mean, it's not like that dynamic isn't ONE OF THE BEST PARTS OF THE SHOW, or anything. Why must you downplay Steve and Danny, evil writers?!)

...so I was going to say: I don't mind if there isn't much Lori. ; *eheh...embarrassed*

I just want to say that I REALLY loved this story! And I would of finished reading it and reviewed MUCH sooner but I was away on a Family vacation so I thought I shouldn't... but the bonus was that I got to read the last few chapters all together when I got home! Whoho! :D Another great story! I LOVED the idea! And I'm glad the world didn't end even though McGarrett called for back up TWICE! ;) ;) Thank you for another great read! Can't wait to see what you write next!

What an exciting finale! Danny really held his own against the criminals - the hide and seek scenes in the hardware store were great! Glad that Steve was able to help out, even trapped like he was. Great banter at the end, too.

And now I'm sad it's all over. Can't wait for the next natural disaster to come to Hawaii!

Great story. Loved the scenes in the hardware store. Hilarious and I always love smart, capable Danny.