Really amazing! I'm just dying to read the next chapter. Hope you post it up soon [0]w[0]/*

Aw, this is cute and the plot is very interesting!
Love it!
[ Am I the only one that fanfiction isn't letting my favorite and follow without commenting? ]

Woo! I can't wait for the next chapter!

I'm in love with this story! I hope you are aware of just how amazing of a story you've got yourself here. Every time I see this story updated.. I nearly squeal with utter delight!

I love the relationship between Alfred and Arthur very much! You did a great job on that! I cannot wait to see what happens next for the two of them.

Please update soon. :3

Mystical08

hey dude! i am literally in love with your story! this is awesome! i love it! please do continue and i hope USUK SEXY TEIMSSS!

...exactly how long will that...'deal'...last?

this looks really good, so update soon!

I love your style of writing, it's truly amazing! Don't worry about the previous reviewer, she apparently is a Russia fangirl. Also, when she stated that "passed out" is only used for someone whom obtained poison from alcohol consumption..I'm sorry to say, but that's most certainly not the case. A person whom has consumed vast amounts of alcohol..can go into a state of "blacking out", which is the same as passing out, and no alcohol poisoning is present. So to say that she used "passing out" wrong, is just plain silly, because she can be right with that.

Also when she stated she can no longer read this because of rape, well I can understand this, but to say Russia isn't the keen choice for that to happen, well who else would be eligible to perform it? It's called fanfiction for a reason love. You are right when you said however that you can't read this, as free will goes, you have every right to back out.

Now for my personal review on this wonderful story. I do believe you did an outstanding job! I love how oblivious you made Alfred, I find this quite adorable to say the least. I also love how you made all the characters thus far. :3 I love the relationship between Artie and Alfred, the bad touch trio, and the wonderful and naked Feli. 3

I am very interested to see how this story progresses! Keep up the great work darling!

First off: I have no word in your fan fiction but after such a beginning I wouldn't consider it to be a good idea to include rape. Sadly you lose me as a reader with this topic. :s
Something that bugged me a bit, to actually pass out from alcohol you are getting poisoned from it, so you should write, fell asleep or dozed off, instead of pass out. It's an often used misunderstanding that inexperienced people write most of the time,no offense this is it.
Another thing: "Just wondering, I swear. Whose Lovi?"-: Who's means Who is, and WHOSE means, asking for the person who possesses the object in the question. Whose Lovi means, who is Lovi's master, who possesses Lovi? Khm. Grammar Nazi AkaiShinda off.
Anyways. I liked how you introduced this kind of living though it would be nice to know Arthur's occupation, I guess this might be revealed later. I liked the flashback in the beginning too. I liked Alfred's personality too, but this evil-Russia image is repulsing a bit. Russia is not evil, he is weird but NOT insensitive and not evil. :( I'm sad to read this, this fan fiction had an awesome starting 3 chapters but this ending and these warnings... I'm sorry :( :(
Take care, and have fun!

Hey! I like this chapter very much! You know it reminded me on Okane ga Nai (No Money, manga and anime) and this I loved very much, though it reminds only in the beginning. I look forward reading more!

I love LOVE Alfred's obliviousness and Arthur's awkwardness. More, please, MORE!

i like it!

Hey this is really good :D I love it ! Can't wait for the next chapter !