Sounds interesting so far. Update soon

CONTINUE!

Finally reviewing this chapter!

Anyway, I like how Luke and Angela met in this chapter. That was so... Luke. Although, does Angela know that Luke was the one who had found her? I would have expected Luke to mention that to her, since he had seemed so excited about it when he was waiting in the clinic for her earlier on.

I wonder where Luke had gone... the Fugue Forest is sounding a bit creepy. And I really want to know what's up with all these flashbacks Angela has been having. What happened in her past? What happened to her sister? And how the heck did that bracelet get into the middle of the forest? Is it the same bracelet that she gave Molly? So many questions!

I hope you manage to continue this story, I'm really interested to know what's going to happen!

-Cotton Candy Mareep

Hmm, as much as I like Jin, I can totally understand how Angela would be eager to get far away from him after her time in the clinic. Especially when he's acting so... odd. Truthfully, I'd be a little creeped out.

I wonder what kind of part Gill will play in this story. And I'm looking forward to see how Luke and Angela will meet, since he was the one that found her and all.

I still don't know what's going to happen in this story that labels it as horror, but the anticipation makes it even more interesting! And what's up with Angela's weird dreams? Are they flashbacks? I get the feeling that something bad or creepy is going to happen, haha.

I hope you update this soon, but don't rush or anything, haha. Take your time. I'll keep a lookout for the next chapter! :)

-Cotton Candy Mareep

I think this is a really great start! I love horror stories, both to read and to write; especially Harvest Moon horror. And I don't mind how short it the chapter is, I personally kind of prefer shorter chapters.

Already, there are so many questions just waiting to be answered! How did Angela get to Castanet in the first place, and why did she lose her memory? Why does Jin react the way he does when Angela tells him her name? Why does he act so secretive? There's definitely something fishy going on. I'm honestly excited to read more.

On another note, I like how Luke was the one to find her, haha. You wrote his character perfectly, in my opinion.

Good job in this first chapter!

-Cotton Candy Mareep

This is an interesting idea. Based on Jin's reaction, it seems like Angela's name is known... and for negative things too. Perhaps I'm wrong but it's great that the first chapter is already making me think. Can't wait for the next chapter!