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Sabine Bardales chapter 26 . 2/16/2019 OMG please continue!, |
Kemi chapter 24 . 12/27/2018 Me: haaa... Sakura: Now what? Me: I feel bad for sasuke. Sakura: wait. Now why are you talking about... Me: Well dear Sakura. It just so happen that the competition is high ranking and the guy canot even be present... Well not that he would have the ability to do something anyways. Seiji is far more interesting to interact with than him. Sakura: Hey! Me: Now dont try to defend the duckling. Sakura: ... Duckling? Me: Yeah duckling. By the way. Any idea why Seiji is being so ... Mmm... Nice? Sakura: Most he have a reason? Me: well at least he must have a purpose. How many uchiha men you know that are that out going with their saviour? |
Kemi chapter 23 . 12/27/2018 Me: Ne Sakura... Sakura: Uhm? Me: Can you bitch slap danzo for me? Sakura: what?...Why? Me: cuz he is a paranoid jerk Sakura: Oh come one he was worse in the future. Me: Thats why I need you to bitch slap him! Sakura: kemi... You are being irra... Me: Irrational my but! He is such a... |
Kemi chapter 12 . 12/27/2018 Yes, it is short. But well... Desserts are supposed to be eaten in small proportions. Damn me and my sweet tooth TvT. |
Guest chapter 3 . 12/26/2018 Sakura: Kai! Kai! kai! ... Ouch! Me: Yes girl keep at it. Sakura: Its not funny! Me: No, it is hilariously sad. Sakura: that is not helping it! |
vquinn19 chapter 1 . 8/8/2018 more please |
merendinoemiliano chapter 26 . 3/21/2018 Weird, but cool up the good work and see you later. |
peppymint chapter 26 . 3/13/2018 Great story. Though I have to admit how the third and his peers will react in the future when they see this little pink haired girl walking down the street. I can kind of see Sakura leaving a scroll behind to be opened by the Hokage on a certain date. |
Iowademoness chapter 4 . 2/5/2018 Three days have passed since she saved his life. She moved him into a cave, that she found far enough away from the battlefield. She carefully covered her tracks and suppressed her chakra, not wanting any enemies following her. The cave she found was near a source of freshwater, a river much to her pleasure. There were also herbs and edible plants around the area of the cave. She was able to collect enough of the plants to last her and her patient a few days. The medical ninja frequently checked her comatose patient to make sure his condition was improving. On a third day, she make a quick trip to a river to fill a bottle of water. Once she finished filling the bottle with water, she sealed it into her storage scroll. She returned to her temporary shelter and paused, as her limited sensory abilities alerted her that her patient had woken up. Sakura slowly entered the cave and could see Tobirama was sitting up and inspecting his bandaged upper body. She was did not move, knowing that it was dangerous to startle an injured shinobi. She waited patiently for him finally notice her. No long after she entered the cave he went stiff. He moved his arms in front of his chest in defense. Her green eyes meet his red eyes. She noted that his body was tense and prepared to fight. Slowly, she raised her hands in non-threatening manner, showing that she was not an enemy. "I'm not going to harm you." She did her best to show sincerity to her patient. His shoulders relaxed, as he lowered his arms. A long uncomfortable silence passed. She fidgeted uncomfortably under his intense stare and noticed he was staring at her pink hair. It wasn't a first time that people have stared at her unusual pink hair. She coughed softly to catch his attention. "My apologizes, I did not mean to stare at you." Smooth and rich baritone voice rolled off his tongue. It was a first time that she heard the revered Second Hokage speaking. The pink-haired kunoichi felt a very pleasant shiver down her back and tried not to show her reaction to his voice. "It's alright, I'm used to people's staring at my hair like that." "Ah, I see. I assumed that it was you who healed me.” "Yes, I did. You had so many life threatening injuries and were bleeding to a death. Normally, anyone who would had those kind of injuries would be dead. You're lucky that I was nearby and managed to heal all of your wounds." Sakura informed him. The white haired man looked impressed, which made a medical ninja feel proud of herself. "I'm aware that I should be dead, but thank you for save my life, miss…" "Sakura." She wisely gave her first name, not wanting to give away her family name. She didn't want to add any more chaos to this timeline, thought she wasn’t sure if her presence had already affected the timeline. "I'm Senju Tobirama." He was smiling politely as he offered his uninjured hand for her to shake. She returned the gesture. Her petite hand was enveloped by his calloused large hand. Sakura smiled and maintained her steady eye contract with his red eyes. It’s by no means perfect, but I believe I fixed some of the grammar errors and made the chapter flow smoothly. I enjoy reading this to story, it has a lot of potential. I suggest a beta reader. They will help you catch misspellings and grammar errors. Please continue writing. |
treavellergirl chapter 26 . 2/4/2018 All that armour has to weight a lot, and to be sneaky and stealthy while dragging around an unconscious patient has to be a valuable skill. To say nothing about not leaving any trace for anyone to find and track them down with. |
TobiSaku4EVER chapter 26 . 2/4/2018 Nice you updated! I really don't know what to say in this chapter But I think it's better if you turn this to a story you know... based on this Tobirama sees Sakura as a fellow shinobi and a friend not a potential 'wife...lol' On how Tobirama, from seeing Sakura as a friend for many years until he realise he love her but it seems it's too late because she had a boyfriend but in the end Tobirama became more than just a friend with Sakura. And they are happily living together! |
TobiSaku4EVER chapter 26 . 2/4/2018 Nice you updated! I really don't know what to say in this chapter But I think it's better if you turn this to a story you know... based on this Tobirama sees Sakura as a fellow shinobi and a friend not a potential 'wife...lol' On how Tobirama, from seeing Sakura as a friend for many years until he realise he love her but it seems it's too late because she had a boyfriend but in the end Tobirama became more than just a friend with Sakura. And they are happily living together! |
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 26 . 2/4/2018 So happy that you updated! :D Great chapter! |
TobiSaku4EVER chapter 1 . 2/4/2018 by the way I enjoyed your story |
ILoveSxS chapter 26 . 2/4/2018 Wow this has not been updated for quite some time. Glad you are back! |