wonderful end,it's so beautiful,happy and melancholic in same time,nice trio,they have a wonderful friendship.

wahh this chapter is so cool,so fun and the kiss between Jin and Hwoarang is so hot ! also the famous sentence"Payback is a bitch",nice chapter

waahh Jin complimented Hwoarang ! he's impressed by him,doesn't he,so class,well done Hwo,also this chapter is so cool,but not the couple Hwoarang/Ling please,just friends

Steve is awesome ! well done boy ! and it was so emotional,touching when he calls Hwoarang by his true name("Hwoarang"even if it's difficult for him to pronounce it),i think that was touched Hwoarang too lol,nice."Ta, "aww Steve can be in love with Hwoarang his mate,it doesn't bother me,i like him and i like Bryan too,even if he hit strong with the mother of Hwoarang,calm down Bryan.

oh no ! who's that Ikari ?! i was sure than it was a pedophile seriously,poor Hwoarang be careful,lol the last sentence is scary"and then...we can spend some time alone...just you and me...and the horses"the horses,of course...,this guy with the description resembles to Jin,no ? but Jin is better than him ! sorry for your ikari but i don't accept this lol,and i love when Hwoarang has dodged the kiss unconsciously haha

BRILL! the start woz awsome! i kinda got lost tho az th story went on... mainly coz ov how long the chapters were, but still.

I'm sorry, I got your comment and I kept meaning to visit your fic page! I love it when Ling and Rang are friends, teehee! Nice dialogue too, you can really hear the character come through!

Hey, this is brilliant, if you ask me. It's very funny and sad and all. I really appreciate the way you translated things, too, because at least you realize that not everyone who reads fanfiction speaks Japanese. Sankyuu!

I only have one complaint: your repetitiveness. You keep saying "the Korean" and "the Japanese" and "the Chinese girl". I'm sure Ling, Jin, and Hwoarang have more attributes than being Korean, Japanese, and Chinese, respectively. But still, great job! I liked the yaoi-ness. Most Tekken yaoi I've read has just been kinda...wonky.

Yay! I'm off to read the other ones.

have you ever heard of .net? it's the so-called "sister" site of this one where you can post all stories ranging from r to nc-17. if you're going to do a lemon, maybe you should post it there. :)

This chapter killed me-It was both sad and funny. But what killed me the most was that Ikari was brought up again...I could feel what Ranga was going through- Well, i don' wanna give you my life story here(I'm sure you don't care too know, anyway) ANYHOO, great fic

OMG! You updated I love you!

This was a good chapter. It was so worth waiting for (remind me next time...)

Hee-hee The only bad part was having to try finding where i left off-what a bitch that was...

I'm completely speechless. Your story is really good. It gives me another point of view for the three of them. And get on with your continuation of this one...what was it? Desire, right?

woww... your story is sure NICEE!

lol,

oh my god, then what ?

i realy love this storry

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lol, werry funny.

this storry rocks.

keep upp the good work.

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