So, I could tell you haven't been to college by your description of it. :p (It sounds like high school in every way here.)
Also, no offense, but Sora is kind of sounding like a teenage girl, which I know is your point of view when writing this, but that's why you really have to think about who the character is. Sora's a goofball, but he's not a schoolgirl. Honestly, it's just something that takes practice and experience. Keep it up! :)

This is awesome! Poor Sora! I hope he gets to kiss Riku soon! Cant wait for next chapter! _

Absolutely loving JGTBM so far! Like, i totally had my face all quirky with concentration! (says my brother) great story this far! Pretty pahleaseee update soon! 3

I'm liking the story but you should try proof reading your story and correct the mistakes. It's hard to even tell who's saying what. It's also difficult to tell the difference from what Sora is thinking from what he's doing and from what he's actually saying. Just a tip. Like I said, I am liking the story. Hope I get to read the next chapter soon.
-Emery.

This story was so cute! I fell inlove with you soku stories! - cute

This story is just wonderful honey, keep up the good work :)

oh my! This is really good! I hope you update soon! I'll be watching for it
Nya

I really like this story c:
I can't wait for more!

Continue plz it was really interesting. Although I think if you do a next chapter make Sora and Riku have a fight so the story will be interesting.

I finished the second chapter and now I'm all like MORE. Good job so far

you need to update honey :3 this is really good :D

Interesting story, please do continue! :D

Sora's inner thoughts are pretty funny. Like it so far.

Please do update :) i love it so far.

This was perfect, you should continue! I loved it :) .