| Reviews for Third Time's Not The Charm |
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Guest chapter 2 . 1/15/2018 He should of spanked him in office tobembarrass him more |
carlea chapter 2 . 1/10/2017 good story |
Inks Inc chapter 2 . 10/23/2015 This was super sweet! Love the idea of Neal trying to wrangle a radius for salary increase. Very enjoyable read, thanks for writing and thanks for your thoughtful reviews on mine, they were much appreciated! |
lilyflower101 chapter 2 . 3/1/2015 Love it! :) |
ullswater chapter 2 . 4/29/2014 Ouch, that sounded like it hurt, but Neal still leaned into Peter for comfort so although he didn't like it he's clearly ok with Peter taking him to task still It was a nice read this short story and showed clearly the close relationship that borders more on father and son than boss and city. Only a father would care so much about stepping in to stop their child from going back to prison |
Fictionescapist007 chapter 2 . 3/23/2013 Love this story! |
Peter chapter 2 . 3/13/2013 This is my favorite white collar spanking fic! This story was so awesome Peter was just perfect and so was Neal your depiction of them was spot on. I hope you continue to write more white collar stories because you are incredibly awesome in writing them. Please write more soon! |
Dicey of Darlo chapter 2 . 2/19/2013 Wow that was a hiding and a half. Loved it though. Neal really knows how to push the boundaries suggesting Peter was going to do some baking when he appeared with the wooden spoon was mega brave or mega stupid! Had to be stupid bearing in mind that spanking! It made me laugh nearly choked on my peppermint aero laughing glad it wasnt me! Brill story I sooo need to see White collar! Thanks for sharing. |
otkcp chapter 2 . 2/17/2013 Aww poor Neal, he's such a little kid in an adult's body sometimes. Lovely fic. |
peppe1951 chapter 2 . 2/8/2013 Well at least Neal knows now that Peter means what he says...screw up repeatedly and you get the spoon. I loved your story and hope you will write another real soon... |
JeanneZ84 chapter 2 . 2/6/2013 I bet Neal is glad to have that over with. JeanneZ84 |
Miss MaryAnn chapter 2 . 2/6/2013 You think of Neal as a five year old, I think of him as a toddler stuck in the "terrible twos." I enjoyed your story very much. I hope we get another from you soon. Thank you for all your hard work. |
alli1 chapter 1 . 2/6/2013 This was wonderful. Peter was as patient as he could be, but Neal pushed him too far. The spanking was much deserved, even if Neal doesn't agree. And I love the quiet time afterwards-and of course, he'll stay for dinner. |
nannyg43 chapter 2 . 2/6/2013 well I think you did a really good job getting the tone of the characters. Peter would be stern with Neal and though I am not a fan of spoons and paddles ('cause Ouch!) I can see how it could come into play. Neal also just can't seem to leave well enough alone and totally deserved the spanking. |
Stamper Comma Leland chapter 2 . 2/6/2013 *dies* This was perfect in every way. Thank you so much for writing it! |