Reviews for The Shot Heard 'Round The World
Gingersnapp518 chapter 5 . 6/1/2017
Im hooked. Please update soon.
Slytherin Studios chapter 5 . 9/9/2016
nicely done.
xxTheChocoholic14xx chapter 4 . 12/1/2013
I enjoy this story! It's amazing! I hope you continue the story. It's really good!
OLamby chapter 2 . 10/27/2013
Please please please please don't give up on this story
Ego mibo orch chapter 4 . 10/26/2013
Hello there :)
I take the chance of reviewing now; so I really like you story: it's mature, it sticks with the movie but still add a lot of thing to it so we don't just get to read the script. And I really like your writing style, it's addictive!
As to your big decisions to make, I think you mean as to keep Jed alive or not - may I give you my opinion? Stick to the movie. The movie had a meaning, and this same meaning isn't the same without Jed's death. As much as I'd like to see Jed walking out of this alive, well, it wouldn't be right. What I advice you is to stick to the film, yes, but add a lot of thing too. Things like Jed & Alice's story, and Robert & Athena's too.
Anyway, I hope you'll keep writing for this fanfiction, and that I'll hear from you soon!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/16/2013
Please update!
sPaRkzZz chapter 4 . 7/18/2013
Please update soon
I'm so curious to find out what happened to Athena
And I'm hoping Alice and Jed get together soon and stop bouncing around each other, they should just hook up and stop the stubbornness
Great story and good job
Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2013
Just found and read your story so far today. It's very good but needs much more robert. You've minimally touched on him. Josh hutcherson's portrayal of robert is one of the reasons the movie was so good! Yes, chris hemsworth did great, too, but i am a huge josh fan lately. Please expound on robert's part in your wonderful story.
SilverAdvenger12 chapter 4 . 5/8/2013
Really like the story!
Guest chapter 4 . 5/8/2013
please don't stop writing! I love this story! Looking forward to reading another chapter!
PonchoV15 chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
Please keep updating! I love this story :D
cookie monster chapter 4 . 5/6/2013
LOVE the story please update soon and not to be rude but can you add in more romance. I know, I'm a total girl.
LCDRFireFly chapter 4 . 5/6/2013
You're doing a great job here! I can see the issues Alice and Jed are having and I really hope they get past it concerning the circumstances they are in. Keep up the good work!
Emma chapter 4 . 5/6/2013
Kind of short, but I'm just glad you updated. Please keep going!
Slytherin Studios chapter 4 . 5/5/2013
I like your story, please update soon.
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