This was funny and a little sad too. I like how all the turtles are in character, all of them including Spike. Nicely done.

lolz

Not hilarious. But great story. You seemed to put them in character. And I love serious Mikey!

Sincerely with a lot of Nipaa!,
Demigoth C. Emo, daughter of Hades

This my second time reading this story and its still as funny when I read it the first . I hope you make some kind of sequel to this .

Haha! Spike! D

Oh, my gosh, this was hilarious! And so well in-character. Seriously, I could hear Greg Cipes and Sean Astin in my head reading the lines. I could totally see this happening in the show too, it was just so perfectly in-character and so well written! Wonderful job! :D

Wow. An awesome story. I can see Mikey feeling that way about Spike and being jealous that Raph talks to him and not Mikey anymore. Nicely done on this.

The Bubbly One,
Shell

That's funny & sad at the same time. Sibling jealousy is much harder to deal with than that in romantic relationships: lovers come & go, but brothers & sisters are your life & blood.
Excellent character exploration idea, perfect written realization. All thumbs up!

XD This is hilarious! XD I love it!