Can you do a sequel to this about what happend right after this with the bullys. I love hype nodd and mutt to all have there own nest of eggs to look after and then little babies.

This story most certainly deserves to continue.

I wanted to go ahead and leave a review for this because I feel this story deserves all the reviews in the world!

I've actually already skimmed through a lot of this story and found it so compelling that I decided to finally sit down and read it all from the beginning. Honestly, there's so much heart and emotion in this! I could feel myself tearing up while reading this chapter! I really like Britta's character and I loved the backstory of Hyp's parents, as heartbreaking as it was.

I'll be sure to leave more reviews as I progress further!

This was definitely something I didn't see coming lol Red Claw's son, you making him THE Sharptooth from the original movie? Nice plot twist for sure lol I definitely have enjoyed this read thus far.

This was an amazingly fantastic story! I keep checking every month or so for the second part! I know you aren't a professional and fan fiction is a hobby but please! I'm dying here!

Your story is incredible. I cannot wait for Book 2. I want to point out two possibilities for Ducky's father. Ruphus from The Swimmer Trials and Sairo from My New Son.

I would love to know if Ace is still alive. It would also be nice to see some chapters centered on Spike. His character is really underdeveloped

This was a great story; even though it took three years to write. I like your list of survivors and honorable mentions. It's a great way to keep track of many characters. I might do something similar to that. I'll be looking forward to book 2. Keep up the great work.

Awesome story! I can't read book two and see if it would be as amazing as this one. Also How about you have littlefoot meet up with some of his grandparents herd and meet some more long lost family?

Hello Angelwriter Solid G3 Legend back from the state of somewhat dead here to give you the final review for your completed masterpiece that has been a long road and journey since I've first read it.

I remember the first day I discovered this story. I had thought at the time they were not going to do anymore movies for the series and I wanted to see more of their great adventures or at least fill in the gap in between the movies and the T.V. series. I was just scrolling through fan fiction until I found this story by random chance. I read its description and thought to give it a try. I read the first chapter and got fascinated because it dealt with looking into the backstories of the side characters that the movies never covered as much. So I continued reading as it got more updates, and I must say the more I read the more I became deeply and emotionally close to this story, its OC's and thought how it was a true fanfic that did the series justice. Everything about it was like watching another movie only better for you have brought it back to its original darker tone roots. I have enjoyed reading every letter of every word in every sentence of every paragraph on each chapter from first to last. So much that I didn't want it to ever end, but of course all great things do have to come to end, but I look forward to reading the sequel.

Now for the review of the latest chapter. Once more I cannot pick a favorite chapter for all the chapters were great. The final chapter was no different and I felt was a wonderful way on how to end such a long saga of chapters for an amazing story. The characters fit the roles so well, Littlefoot being the camera guy, Pterano finally completing his journey of redemption, Britta being rewarded for all the years of un fair suffering she had suffered, and Hyp taking the steps to change for the better and start things off over a new leaf as they say. The ceremony was amazing and bringing Chomper's family there along with everyone was a wonderful touch to add to the thing, and them seeing how different things are with the leaf eater's ways of life compared to their ways of life. All of it fit so well and I do believe you deserve a writing reward for such an accomplishment.

All and all, this story is one of the best fan fictions I have read in my life and ever will read in my life regarding the Land before Time series. I am deeply thankful for having the privilege and honor to read something that should go down in fanfic history. This story has been such a pleasure to read and has helped me take my mind off the most troubling of my times. Thank you Angel, for bringing this story to life and letting us read it. I wish you the best of luck on everything you do now and the future.

This is Solid G3 Legend signing off and again thank you and good luck. :)

Can we see more of the main characters? I mean specifically Spike and Ruby. I would like to see more backstory for them. I love Spike and cannot find any stories that focus on him.

This was a great story! Yep, yep, yep!

I damn near lost it! You have such a talent for writing; this might as well have been a deleted scene from one of the movies or something!

Hello Angel its been a very long while, always glad to read a chapter and this one was no different then the others that I have read in the past. Really great.

For the review, wow, finally got to see things through Topps' perspective for a change. He's one of the most iconic side characters of the series. Its glad to finally see things through his view for a change. And what a view that was I mean, no wonder he ended up like he was I mean, yikes, his dad, his family, oh my goodness. I've, wow, they should bring you in to write for the Land Before Time series. You always know exactly how to make something that's great for both the kids and adults. Because this has everything the original had, a really dark kid's story. Something that most stories these days really need.

This chapter like the others before it is, I'll just say its one of those chapters that you red to read because its probably the most essential chapter you've written with covering one of the most infamous side character of the series and explain why he became what he was that we all know and forever remember him for. Thank you for this essential character and showing us Topps' story. Thank you again for another great chapter and good luck with everything you have to do.

This is Solid G3 Legend signing off.

This is an amazing story. I wonder if you ever thought of doing a crossover as a sequel to this.