holy shut this fic is breathtaking I hope it gets continued

Ok, a few things I noticed. How does Sora know about Namine and Axel, let alone also knows they live at the same place as Roxas? He'd never been introduced to them and it's never mentioned either when Sora knows about it, so it's just weird he suddenly knows out of nowhere.

And in chapter 4: Remembering what Riku and Kairi had said to me earlier, I recalled that Sora too was an orphan. I believe when Riku and Kairi said that Roxas wasn't there, he was 'busy' at the restroom.

In chapter 3:Riku veered off
to change next to a guy he addressed as Tidus. But then in chapter 4:Here lie Tidus and Yuna Taylor. Beloved
parents and devoted protectors.

Please be careful with inconsistency.

great story, its really interesting and I hope you update soon.

The wait was so worth it. I SHIP THIS SO HARD! xD I love it when characters get involved in music and just feel something. Mood setter, ain't it? Haha. And I'm willing to bet this white-gloved-old-but-deep-voiced person is a certain character in the game that started all this nonsense with the Heartless. I can't wait to beat his anus up in the game for what he's done. :D Good luck with the next chapter.

A great chapter! Beautiful imagery and emotional moments :)

wa wa wa. i really want to read the next part. who is the hunter? will someone do a massacre to roxas? aw. wanna read~

I RLLY LOVE THIS FIC...IT'S SOSOSOSO GOOD I'M SO READY FOR IT TO UPDATE JUST FUCK ME UP

An so chaos reigned. I was'nt expecting that...but its defently different! update soon!

oooh Roxas is feeling...young. lol im dieing to see where this is going!

All I can say is DAAAAAMN! they sure wrecke the place lol. I love this story so much now.

Oh? I smell trouble well *'ll just have to rea on to fin out whats gonna happen. As painful it is to see Roxas in a state I will admit you hanle the situation nicely. Well if I did'nt know any better I'd say I have a New favorite! XD

I really o love how the story is already flowing and how descriptive you are, a very good start!

HUZZAW! Our writer is back! xD First of all, thank you for finally updating. I flippin' love this story and have been checking on it every chance I got. Second of all, your chapters leave me speechless. Deal with it 'cause it's your fault for writing so cool xD And third of all, I knew the ringtone was gonna be 'Dearly Beloved', but the one I was thinking about was from KH 358/2. But nonetheless, the choice was acceptable 'cause it was from Kingdom Hearts (YEEESS!) Again, LOVED the chapter! OMG, when Roxas was all up in his vampiric nature I was like "LOL! Hot! Awesome!" He be fierce ;3 Personally, I think Seifer got what he flippin' deserved. The jerk xP Anyway, faithful reader here waiting patiently for the next update ;D

This is good! Update

OMG! Loved your new chapter, was shocked that Roxas killed that guy! And whose this mysterious woman, I'm so glad you gotta a new chapter done, and also can check out my stories almost on work with the 7th chapter?