please add more if u an but other then that I loved this was sad at the beginning but when I kept reading it was wonderful

I liked it so bad I woke up at 5:00 today to read it!

Vegeta I lov you!who could hate such a bad boy like you?:)

Awesome couple and funny Bulma.
Keep it on!
;-)

I'm not going to lie, I've been reading different v/b fanfic on and off for a while now and never got around to reading this one.

Now I just feel bad for myself, how could I have missed such a great story! Keep'em coming! I'm addicted!

Haha I think we all know that "No strings Attached" realationships always turn out to be something more than lust!

I don't know why I'm still reading this. The reasons you coming with are not logical. This is getting really silly. Very cheesy.

I'm sorry to say that as much as I was liking this story, this chapter is so bad. You have still grammatical errors and few misspellings, but the characterization of Bulma is so ridiculous. Come on, does she have no dignity, begging so much not caring that he won't admit to want her and still she waits because of his tormented past and undeveloped emotions. Please. Also, the whole conversation with Terrak about love... really men do not talk this way. They sound like women. Normally, when you portray Vegeta with have conflicts with his love for Bulma is acceptable because you have them in AU, but here he is a Sayian and although you made this sort of AU-ish you might have tried to keep him more canon.
Well, this is my personal opinion, but maybe because I don't like seeing Bulma begging, just not right. Anyways I will keep reading, I did need to know how this ends.

wow just wow! I'm utterly speechless! This is the best Vegeta's point of view ever (I think the only one to exist that I've come across!)

I was laughing, frustrated and angry loved this! Certainly one of my favourite fics. You had his character spot on. His thoughts are hilarious and half the time I couldn't stop laughing!

Thank-you this was just amazing, and can you believe I accidently came across this beauty!

I loved the story, I really like alternate universes and especially of the pair of Bulma and Vegeta, Greetings

Excellent story, I really enjoyed it!

I liked Terrak, he was an interesting character.

My only complaint on this one was the spelling, sure it all passed spell-check, but that doesn't make it right. I've noticed that it also got progressively worse as the chapters went on. However, I also noted that the story is 6 years old, and hardly any point and making any edits.

Now, onto the many pros. I generally don't care much for OC's, but I really liked Terrak, and the fact that he married an alien and have a daughter made him that much more well-rounded. Good supporting character in his own right.

I'm just glad that I read this story after it has been completed, it might have been too much for me if I had to wait for every chapter. The points and story flowed rather well and actually read the entire thing within one day. I was actually a bit intimidated on starting to read this fic due to the length, but again, it flowed well so it doesn't seem nearly as long as the numbers suggest.

Thanks for putting this one up and I will go and read some of your other fics as well.

I loved this, seriously, ever thought of doing one from Bulma's POV? different story line, of course, but still hers. It'd be nice to have her in indecision and confused, still with yamcha, while vegeta gives chase. out of lust of course, or so he'd say at the most lol.

*ebil grins* this just made me think of a story line I'm now going to work on...yes...BV FOREVER! *flails* and hiei/kagome and kurama/kagome and sesshoumaru/kagome... *raises a brow at my love of Kagome* huh.

o i really enjoyed it. the only thing was that vegeta's decision took forever! kinda dragging with the same thing, but i guess thats vegeta for ya! stubborn and all. so theres really nothing wrong with it hahaha. good job! and i know what you mean about a desperate author...I AM TOO! hahah you should read my one shots (3 of em) and tell me what you think, i'd love to hear YOUR opinion! anyways. great job with the story! nicely doen

I love this story

im sorry that i didnt review every chapter

its just that i wanted to read the next chapter!

You are Very good

at writing people in there own character

alot of people make vegeta not vegeta

and you kept him the way he is

and bulma to

im also very sad its over

are you gona make another one?

you should

my email is