I really don’t like the bias this story has against paladins. For instance, when the Druid spouts off about them fighting a group of druids to kill a former cultist. If this story wasn’t biased, the paladin would’ve retorted with the atrocities said cult enacted. But instead he essentially says it was necessary evil. The act of killing an entire forest of druids just to kill a former cultist is indeed stupid, but he could’ve pointed out why he believed those cultists needed to be purged, for instance by explaining and even worse act of genocide or rape acted out by the cult.

We need more Dominator! Louise 8n this fandom, so much better than seeing her get rolled over all the time.

Amusing tale!

Yay for the curing of the Better Big Sister!

Funny!

I loved Louise taking up a defensive position under the blanket :)

Thanks for all the laughs!
Particularly mentioning Minsc and killing Guiche&Friends :)

A dig on the second amendment? Bringing politics into fucking fanfiction is dumb as fuck first of all, if you want to debate that shit go to reddit or some kind of politics forum. Second of all, fuck you, without the second amendment is vitally important to the American way of life. Without it guns could easily be taken away from good citizens, who just like guns as a hobby, want better self defense, or hunt to provide food for their family when money is running low. Now you may be thinking, guns kill people, that means they're bad. Not true, idiots use guns to kill people, that's why there are gun safety laws and tons of regulations to keep idiots in check, if you want to stop shootings from happening, advocating more gun laws is a dramatically better alternative to just taking guns away. Other countries have taken guns from citizens and you'll find that those same countries criminals are still armed with firearms. That would take away from people who just want to defend themselves. If you cant see this from both sides you are a biased ignorant moron. I Completely agree shootings are terrible and there needs to be less of them, I would prefer none at all. As I stated previously that's why gun laws are a thing. Keep things like this in mind before you start calling something like the American constitution and bill of rights a stupid piece of paper. Calling it that is disrespectful of the founding fathers and people that died on both sides of the American revolution. Hopefully you can see this from an unbiased perspective and come to a cleaner conclusion.

That cursed rain during the night battle would have been helpful.

Ahahah Aeron are equal with Leylin Farlier in infamy, great work it's such a shame there are not similar cross over with evil mc from the DnD universe.
Good story too bad the update have ended.

Such a shame that it is abandoned, it would've been nice to read more of it. F&F. Its been more than three years since update, but a guy can dream, right?

"naturally the surrounding rocks also had to be strengthened with magic or else anyone could bypass the gates and go through the stone."

This is a good detail that gives me hope for this story.

"Of course you agree, any normal person would agree with me. Only the tree-huggers don't." The dwarf ranted."

Insert LotR Dwarven knife eared rant and Dwarf Fortress jokes here

"As the paladin was having a coughing fit she dashed and circle kicked him in the groin.
Valiar's legs gave way and he collapsed on his knees."

I'm pretty sure she would be more likely to damage her foot on his platemail/armor, but this is funny.

"Its astonishing that people who fear all that is different would be able to even form a unified society."

Well, a unified society of rape, thievery and murder, but as long as you're Neutral/Evil and fine with those things it wouldn't seem so unpalatable.

Well, hopefully Louise won't be corrupted and will be able to keep him in line, at least mostly, otherwise it might be better of for Halk if she never summoned him in the first place.

This was amazing. Good shit. You get the best story of the site award. Also Herr der Schatten is a great song. Cheers.

This is like a really good orgasm.

I beg you continue this i loved it and i think others did too and if possible add Necromancer the harem Louise,Tabi,Kriche,Siesta and Mathilda it would be wonderfuld like lets say something snaped in necro and took them for him self i beg you