| Reviews for Lightning in your Eyes |
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bellalib chapter 3 . 6/13/2014 Love it... Please update soon... |
Tren Rogue chapter 3 . 1/29/2014 More please? |
geetac chapter 3 . 8/29/2013 I like the chapter |
Lupinesence chapter 3 . 8/27/2013 Great chapter :) |
Lupinesence chapter 2 . 8/21/2013 Cool fic so far |
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 2 . 8/20/2013 cute |
Le Diablo Blanc2 chapter 2 . 8/20/2013 Im really glad you put harry with neville as friends(sorry but i hate ron always will hes the worst friend ever) Looking forward to how their altered personalities change their adventures at hogwarts and who they become friends with could easily see the twins seeing them as rivals to their title of best pranksters. I really hope they dont become friends with Ron and i seriously hope you dont pair Harry with Ginny(another character i dislike felt their whole relationship was forced just to put some romance in the book i mean who marries their best mates sister who also looks like a younger version of harrys mother thats a freudian nightmare right there) |
BesideMoonlight chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 I think that would be something Snape would do... Great Chapter. (I'm not logged in...) |
Susan M. M chapter 1 . 8/20/2013 Good beginning, although given Sirius' vocabulary you might want to change the rating from T to M. Very believable, having the process take two years - these things are not done quickly - and the changes in Harry from a sweet, lively baby to a withdrawn, frightened toddler. Good use of Augusta Longbottom, and I liked the quick cameo of Snape. I especially liked Sirius realizing Dumbledore had a good reason for wanting Harry to be brought up away from all the fuss and bother, although Dumbledore was obviously mistaken in his choice of guardians. |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013 your summary got my hopes up a bit too much, but the story is still really good |
ElizabethAnneSoph chapter 1 . 5/21/2013 Oh my god, I wonder if Harry and Draco will become good friends, and Harry lying? Well it is a really nice and new idea! Keep going, this is promising! |
deanine chapter 1 . 2/6/2013 Interesting beginning! |
326355757287 chapter 1 . 2/4/2013 It's a good beginning. I can't wait for the next chapters. |
sannipan chapter 1 . 2/4/2013 Huh, that was unexpected, Harry Potter Sorted into Slytherin... Anxious to see where this'll go! |