Annnnd they're high on something that's at least a mild aphrodisiac. Lovely.

First off, I really like this story and I find myself coming back to it time and again. Beyond that, the updates in the show have now added another layer to see how you as an author predicted what was to come, and I don't want to spoil it if you haven't seen the new season yet (I've only caught up recently, myself), but reading yoir story this time through, I particularly enjoyed the "truth that was more complicated than that, something tangled and black and aching that Sherlock was sure they didn't have a name for", which I think works quite well with the recent revelations.

So funny and suspenseful, like a caper movie such as "Revenge of the Pink Panther" with Peter Sellers or something. Well done!

Sixteen months and no last chapter, but marked complete? Odd.

I really love your writing style. If you're not already, you should be doing this professionally. What I thought would be a mindless 51 turned out to be a most pleasant surprise, very enjoyable to read. I love that the story comes through without you having to explain all of it. With the emotional depth making the story, more than the kissing itself. Keep on writing!

Hnnng. Why would you end it there, though? Can't we have a real kiss, an out-in-the-open no-secrets "GOD I LOVE YOU" kiss?

Hmmf. Fine. It's excellent, of course.

I really love your writing style. You not only made this incredibly fun to read but also Easy to read-I almost forgot that I wasn't watching it instead (and for this grammar-Nazi, that is about as complimentary as I can possibly get). WELL DONE.

God dammit these two fuckers will be the death of me! Arghhhjjjkkkk so good! Aw man that kissing session was just so well written argh.
I think you could have gotten away without using the drugs but hey, it added and it was good.
Ugh but seriously! THEY NEED TO STOP BEING SO DAMN ADORABLE!

whatdoyoumeanionlygetoneotp x

Awww this was so sweet! I knew as soon as John was ill what was going to happen but it was cuter than I expected. Plus jealousy which is always a great addition in my eyes :)

Whatdoyoumeanionlygetoneotp x

ohhh i liked this, especially the ring exchange. i've read a lot of 'pretending to be a couple for a case' type things but this was a new take. i would say maybe ask someone to check it through, no necessarily a beta, there was nothing wrong, just because sometimes the author can see it so clearly in their head tehy forget the reader cant and the thing about the shelf falling was a tad confusing... maybe its just me idk

anyway, i didnt spot any mistakes and i liked it :)

this waas absolutely fantastic! favourite FOR SURE. each chapter was fantastic and i love how each kiss was different. really spectacular. amazing details in chapter 4 about their kiss. loved how it took up about 3/4 of it hahah!

These chapters are brilliant! My favourite was definitely The Blogger (chapter 2) - excellent reason to kiss there ;) Can't wait for future updates, keep going! :)

Oh that was simply fantastic! Loved every single one!

John's comments on swimming made me giggle so badly and my heart is melting from just how adorable Sherlock and John are together!

Very good chapter. Sherlock can't leave!