Reviews for Missed the Bus
Jenndifurry chapter 7 . 10/28/2019
I like the story I'm sad it never got finished.
lswhite chapter 7 . 3/1/2015
Why did you stop writing this story? Are you going to finish it?
C.Elder chapter 7 . 2/4/2015
Well, now you have Just Business and this story that just suddenly stop , leaving your readers adrift...again.
C.Elder chapter 1 . 2/4/2015
Promises, promises about lots of chapters and a chapter a week etc, but you did say that too about your other story which suddenly stopped at 3 chapters- and total radio silence for over a year now.
nights of wonder chapter 7 . 1/20/2015
This was absolutely gorgeous. Do keep going!
Mirandaannw chapter 7 . 9/28/2014
Sad this isn't finished, someday maybe?
DarlingVioletta777 chapter 7 . 9/30/2013
Oh, I'm so sad it stopped there. Am loving this AU S2. Would love to see new Logan/Veronica scenes, but am enjoying the look at the other characters.
CCBTH chapter 7 . 8/22/2013
Updates?
Calypso chapter 3 . 7/3/2013
I agree about Meg, the show clearly didn't explore her character enough. Not that I was complaining at the time. But you corrected the mistake brilliantly. Again, as well as for the other characters, you got Meg's voice perfectly. Girl, you're even making me sort of ship Meg and Duncan (Megan?) which is sad seeing as one of them is dead and the other is...well.

"Duncan's smile clearly says that this is a flawless plan and not a deeply uncomfortable situation where everyone will be unhappy."
"Duncan's forehead creases in confusion and concern, and Veronica smiles wearily, stunned once again by the boy's incredible ability to be surprised when his plans don't come together cleanly. When someone's feelings get hurt." You're not portraying a very smart Duncan in this story, are you? who can blame you, really. I love it. Made me smile.

"Those three are too preoccupied to notice his discomfort and by the time they acknowledge him he's slipped back into his comfortable cloak of scorn."
"But the rule has always been fake it until you make it, and he'll keep faking this indifference until it becomes the truth. As remote as that possibility feels."
Lastly, Logan's feelings, his voice, his cynicism, his powerlessness, I felt all of that and more in this chapter. I love your Logan.
Calypso chapter 2 . 7/3/2013
Good chapter, short though. But sometimes short is the best kind, right? The characters' voices are still perfect. What you wrote about Meg and Duncan is interesting, it made me see them with a whole new light. I never really shipped them. I loved Meg but, idk, I always felt like the show's writers never really gave us a chance to understand what they had together. I mean, we got the episode in season one where Duncan is playing mystery prince charming or something... Was Meg just another Veronica for Duncan? Why exactly did they break up, was it only because of Veronica? Also, the child abuse was one of the most interesting (and awful) thing in season two, I hope it's gonna play an important part in your plot. Season two was brilliant anyway, for the good as well as the bad. Which I think we can say for the show. I'll stop rambling now. You said that feedback is love, right? Well, I'm sending all my love from Paris. Just because they say that it's the best kind of love, don't they?
Calypso chapter 1 . 7/2/2013
Love the tone of the first chapter! it's like you were reading Rob Thomas's thoughts when he wrote these scenes. The break-up scene. Oh My. I used to hate it, being a die-hard-LoVe-shipper-forever-I-don't-know-what-I- am-gonna-do-after-the-movie-is-released-there-will -be-no-true-canon-LoVe-anymore-despair, but now I kinda love it, with what how you wrote it. Veronica's fears, Logan's hurt, soooo true! You got it so well. I am sort of ashamed because you wrote something really good really well and I can't even write a decent detailed review in return. I'll try to do better for the next chapters. Going to sleep now , it's 1.30am.
spk chapter 7 . 6/29/2013
Definitely interested. :)
nikatsu chapter 7 . 6/25/2013
Call me intrigued. :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
brankel1 chapter 7 . 6/17/2013
Fantastic job.
Shel12 chapter 7 . 6/17/2013
Another good chapter. Enjoyed the Wallace stuff and I am glad the plan is coming together.
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