Reviews for The Martyr
30MinutesProduction chapter 2 . 1/19/2014
«It's when he greets you with open arms and a smile that you need to be afraid.»

This was priceless. Thank you.
(I've got one hell of a goofy smile on my face)
The Mortal Slytherpuff chapter 16 . 1/9/2014
Great story! I can't wait to read part two!
WriterGirl1198 chapter 5 . 1/5/2014
I just now noticed something. While I like how you connected the people of the Northern Tundra with the Dwarves by way of Aule, it would make more sense if his wife Yavanna had granted them that gift, as she is the Vala of the Wild and animals. That way they could also be connected in that way. Aule created the Dwarves out of stone. Just a suggestion, though. :D
ptl4ever419 chapter 16 . 1/4/2014
I love it! But kinda want to see Ariya pregnant on their journey and not realize it or be hiding it from Thorin, but I'm not the author so… It was such a cool idea though especially the Beorn part :)
ptl4ever419 chapter 6 . 1/3/2014
Was that using her form for vengeance?
The Dark Insomniac chapter 16 . 1/3/2014
Aww! Loved the way you ended that! 'But that , my friends, is a tale for another time.' Makes me so want to know the next part! Well done!
LadyDunla chapter 16 . 1/2/2014
Lovely ending. Just a question, that tale for another time, will that be written as part of this story, or will it be in a new one?
Thank you for your hard work!
Miriel Tolkien chapter 11 . 1/2/2014
Gilni/Dis was PERFECT. And the apology was definitely good, as was the fluff.
kaia chapter 16 . 1/1/2014
awesome job!
Coreys Kitten chapter 16 . 1/1/2014
When I read the title of this chapter I was so sad. I hate to see this amazing story end but I'm also happy that you're writing another part. Can't wait for it.
This story is unlike any other I've read. You're an amazing author :)
Please keep up the good work!
Yavelee chapter 16 . 1/1/2014
And that, my friend, is a wonderful story. :)
Crying with joy chapter 16 . 1/1/2014
If my " name" didn't give it away I am actually crying right now. I love love love this story and was on the verge of thinking you would abandon it. I am thrilled you did not. I think the ending of this story is absolutely perfect and I applaud you for your excellent story. And as sad as I am that this story is over- that was one heck of a good story. If you ever doubt that, just remember your story was the very first one on the list within an hour of your posting the chapter. Thank you for such a fantastic fanfiction ( that I desperately wish would be expanded into a book) and congradulations on your two internships. And if you start to write again, I would like to suggest that you post a new chapter letting people know. That would be most wonderful. Thank you again for writing.
WriterGirl1198 chapter 16 . 1/1/2014
Ok, when I saw that this chapter was titled Epilogue, I admit that I was ready to hurt someone. But when I saw that it was just the end of part one, I relaxed some. I really, really, really cannot wait for the next chapter in this awesome story! :D
Beloved Daughter chapter 16 . 1/1/2014
Yay! Awesome conclusion to an awesome story! :)
Nicci1234 chapter 16 . 1/1/2014
That's a great ending for your story! I'm looking forward to reading the second! :)
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