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Wonderful story! A fast and enjoyable read, only sad part about is that it didn't got finished!

~kaffeenator

This has been a really fun read so far! Given me plenty of ideas to work with :D Thanks for the great chapter!

Peter's selflessness is a bit part of the love triangle-square-thing. Debra thinks that his desire to help others is a weakness, and thus doesn't truly know him. Felicia doesn't acknowledge this as part of spiderman's persona, and thus truly doesn't know him. Whoever figures out that this is Peters decision and Peters decision alone, will be the one to win his heart.

*THE DRAMA INTENSIFIES*

Shout out to Debra for being the most out of nowhere character in this fanfic! Did not see any of this coming!

Honestly, I wasn't expecting this much drama but I am loving where this is going!

Could we consider this... a catfight? *rimshot*

"But, he's just, just a boy. Barely 20."

I feel like a lot of the time, spiderman's age gets glossed over. I'm glad it was included in this fic, it really helps emphasize the peril he's in.

"I believed in you. I always thought you were more than the dumb flirt you pretended to be. And I still do. I think you're intelligent and cunning. But all you've been is cold and manipulative to me. I'm sick of you using me, ok. Go torment someone else for a while."

Shout! Out! To! Peter! I'm glad he stood up for himself, especially since it gave Felicia a chance to examine herself.

Poor spidy :/ always getting the short end on the stick.

"Yet there was something bland about him."

For some reason this line made me snort loud enough to wake up my dog.