Thanks for writing this story! You were one of the first fanfic writers I fell in love with, and it's easy to remember all of the wonderful stories you've written, even after ten plus years.

I can't thank you enough for all the wonderful memories you've provided.

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE don't leave this story! I've already fallen in love with it, therefore I NEED to read the finished story! PLEASE at least finish it!

- Angel

This chapter sets Windfall up to be ended from this point very nicely - chapter 4, 5 at the latest. I recommend an epilogue.

The other chapters could and should be cut in my opinion. This was the last chapter I liked to read.
P.s. There are some formatting issues with your old stories. Bold italic entire chapters.

Annou... are you going to contiunue this? It's a good story, even if some of the background stuff is a little out-of-date with the series by now, but that's Ok. It's just... the last update was nearly seven years ago now.

One more thing... I'm not entirely sure I buy the 'weak heart' thing.

oh am waiting for the next chapter i can't wait

I really hope you pick this back up again. It really is such a good story.

'Never do it again'? Might I point out that you said that in 2007 and it's now 2013 almost 2014? Yeah...NEVER again... Oh well, I'm just going to sit here and hope that you update soon before I forget what's this story is supposed to be about.

I admire your ability to leave a good enough cliffhanger that, even though it's been 6 years since this updated, I am still holding out hope that it is alive.

Your writing is amazing! I wish I could write chapters even half of yours! So, it's been about five years. Please tell me you didn't die!

So, four and a half years later of 'to be continued' and I'm starting to wonder. Brilliant story though. So much happening.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

Amazing story. I'm just sad that it's .. on hiatus? abandoned? I'm not sure. I know that you say that it's on vacation on your profile, but that hasn't been updated since 2010.

I hope that Kaito doesn't fall for his family's plans. I have a slight suspicion that they burned down his house, but that doesn't seem quite right. The weird thing about this story is that it's incredibly long but also seems to move very slowly. I think that it's all the detail that include in the story.

I love your Ayumi and I hope that we get to see a scene from Hakuba's perspective at some point. I can't figure out what he's thinking.

it's been years. i HIGHLY doubt Ysabet has thought about updating her old stories.

i hope she does soon. i REALLY love this one. it has more thought than most and it has an interesting story. i hope she writes more

but again, i doubt she'd even update ANYTHING. it's been years on this one

tasty this lil' story...tastier than most.

Very good, I like it so far xD

I love this fic, please update soon.

I really see nothing to criticize.

The only thing I want is that a new chapter be uploaded as soon as you have the time.