cool :) loved seb :)

Love this - Molly deserved a human Jim

So enjoyed this characterization of JM -Molly would have done him a world of good , I think!

I loved this fic, I really wish that it had gone down like this or that Molly would give the real Jim a chance ... any chance at al thta you will write a sequel?

Hi! I really liked this. I liked how it was Jim's take on everything...and this was hilarious (and heartfelt)! Please keep writing for Jim, Seb, and Dani! (She's a good character). Please! Keep up the good work.

This was ridiculously different from most Moriarty things I've read.
And it was brilliant.
The character you captured was humorous but still very Moriarty, with the underlying edge. It was an interesting take and I must say I much enjoyed reading it. I was put off by the first person, but it ended up making the story.

I wonder if I was, or wasn't, the only one who had an image of Molly, wearing a feathery headdress and red warpaint, sat cross-legged in front of a Terry Pratchett decorated with dream-catchers? No? Eh, send my love to, Mies then could you, please?

Oh-my-gosh. I love this. I really, really do. It's a funny Moriarty, but all the same he's still Moriarty. I sorta like to think he ended up maybe kinda liking Molly, cuz she's such a sweetheart, but I never really saw tha as fitting his personality. Here he ends up genuinely liking her while remaining Jim Moriarty, consulting criminal. Love.
And Dani and Seb deserve some lovin' too :)

Liked this quirky tale very much; can't wait to read your other efforts.

Mistress of the killer final line in a chapter- "It's more on whether or not you actually have one…"
Giggle...

So good, as always. Speaking of timezones, I'm in Asia so I get these in the evening... a Garmonbozia bedtime story is the kind of luxury money can't buy. You are literally "the Storyteller."

I like this one a lot...it's really fun.

Good Lord, Sally, just dig my heart out with a spoon. Because Jim is, he really really is, more human than Sherlock can ever be. And you've captured that brilliantly. Bravo.

Looks like both Jim and Sherlock are rather susceptible to the ordinary ones, aren't they? Don't go native, Jim! Normal people can't make bombs!
Thanks again- this made my day. (Actually I love that you always update at the same time every day, because due to crazy random happenstance that happens to be right before I go off to start morning classes. A little coffee and Garmonbozia to start the morning and you can't go wrong! Er... well, morning here at least. Time zone shenanigans.)

How is it possible that I actually feel SORRY for the world's greatest criminal mind?
*Sigh* Thanks for a great story to start off my day. I will be smirking to myself with remembered witticisms throughout my classes. :D