I enjoy in reading this really great story so far. The chapter i readed are very interesting on what is going to happen next on making us wanting to know more. Can you please continue the story in these chapter? I hope to read more of this really very great story to the end.

Good job! I love it.

OMR! This is really good! I am so curious and just so hyped to know what's going on! And... just... Amazing!

Oh my!?

Update the next chapter please
Will yugi fall for yami and vice versa
Why is atemu in the shadow realm
Will atemu save yugi

I think Yuugi's connection to Heba is that from before Yuugi met Chary, Heba had kidnapped him and made him into his pet(like, quite literally his pet). Even though he has met Chary now, a part of him is controlled by Heba(though it is a small part, it is an effective part) making it impossible for him to refuse, since if I'm right, Heba is the king of yamis and therefore the strongest. Did I make the correct sort of idea(did I mke the wrong kind of suggestion / get confused?)?

You know that Silent Magician is actually a female, right? But luck you because I'm writing a story with a female and a male Silent Magician. (2 different magicians)

nice story :3

I cant wait anymore ,
I neeeeed a new chapter C:
i LOOVE this story ! **
please Keep this story up :))
AND MAKE MORE YUGIxYAMI MOMENTS ! please

omg ! i love ur story ! :D
I quite hate Chaos because of what he does to Chary :(
i really want to know what will be with yugi and yami !
i am SO HAPPY because u Updated often ! :)
KEEP IT THAT WAY ;)

OH MY GOSH! sucha event filled chapter. i acually think that either heba is yuugi's older brother or he has some sort of kin ship. amane i think that it is ryou sister or something . OH MY GOSH GREAT CHAPTER I CAN NOT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT ONE! XD!

Heba is a little devil in this story. I wonder what all he has planned, since he seems to have a thing for Atemu but also called Yugi his pet.

I wonder what Atemu wants with Chaos. I'm sure it can't be anything good since Chaos is the Yami to Chary and Atemu wants to keep Yugi and Chary safe along with the crush Atemu seems to have on Yugi. Yugi is just so likable...

Misty "I can't comment on this..."
Angel "I like it."
Kira "A straight guy liking yaoi... Not even my friends know of a person like you Angel."
Angel "I like my Kira's likes and dislikes..."
Misty "This just reminded me why I love to be single."
Kira "o.o."
Angel, Misty, & Kira "The Dark Passions out!"

Misty "Was hoping for Yugi. Oh well. Still like this story."
Kira "Nothing fun to do?"
Angel "Nope."
Kira "How about you Misty?"
Misty "Nope."
Kira "... Let's do it then?"
Misty "Okay!"
Misty, Kira, & Angel "The Dark Passions out!"

Misty "Oh my..."
Kira "I like this one... I guess I'll follow it."
Angel "You best, this one is original to me... This is the first time I have seen one like this.
Kira "Time to leave Angel will you do the thing?"
Angel "Why me?"
Kira "Because I said so."
Angel "*Shrugs* The Dark Passions out."