does naruto still have kurama in this fanfiction please tell us that naruto still does have kurama in this fanfiction and also please update.

You can't even write a story out properly, this is read like a goddamn play script.

Well, this cinches it: You've turned Naruto into a Gary Stu. Jaden couldn't beat Zane, the top student at the academy; by what logic should Naruto manage to beat him, then?

Also, you're wrong about the contents of Zane's Deck: 3 Cyber Dragons (LV5), Cyber Barrier (LV6) and Cyber Laser (LV7), those are the sole monsters above Level 4 that he uses in the Anime-verse.

So, that's one count of plot-mandated Zane-beating (pretty bad in the believability department), using a carbon copy of Yami Yugi's Deck no less. Allow me to reiterate that Naruto is unequivocally a Gary Stu, the way you've presented him in this story.

The pointless Crowler bashing does you no favors either; how does not being generically attractive constitute Vellian being, and I quote, 'creepy-ass'. Kind of a dick move to say about someone.

The prose itself isn't worth cheering about, either: I can't pinpoint what or why, but it simply feels iffy to me as a whole. Also, you've misspelled a number of words, and overused the semi-colon.

Certainly an interesting story. I look forward to reading the next chapter.

glad there are some of the good guys lose. glad for more alexis/naruto bonding. please put some with fontaine as well

The chapter was pretty good but how come Akatsuki is able to come to this world but it doesn't surprise me because Naruto is vital to their plans because of the Kyubi.

I gotta say I am really envious of Naruto because Fontaine is very hot to say so I would be lying but Naruto is a student would they permit a Teacher to date a student because they have law to prohibit this from happening.

The thing I like about your stories are how versatile they are because you do crossovers with many different stories making the stories have a lot of flexibility, and you don't specialize in just certain stories, which is very good in my opinion.

The story is very interesting because I followed the original show when it was still popular, and Alexis is very attractive, and Naruto is rather lucky to have her as a pairing but I don't know how is Asuka can you give me details on who she is right.

Blackwing deck? that will be hard to beat

Great game chapter!

good chapter

Update soon please

nice chapter, when i said get together i was hoping for Alexis to say i love you to him but still, nice chapter

Yay new chapter. Kaiba gave him way too much if he wins. Damn obito ruined their date.