Reviews for Piece of Cake
jasdevi's secret sissy chapter 1 . 2/4/2014
hhahahahaha,near basically bought his way out of cleaning duty by using cake!
Shadow Fox 2013 chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
:D So CUTE! Near cooking is something I'd LOVE to see ;)
Gazlover12 chapter 1 . 7/25/2013
Hahhaah this was both cute and funny! Oh Near...so in character, lol. Excellent job with this!
Exploading albino potato chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
I liked it when Gevanni said "You could hurt yourse-" and how he thought he had to supervise Near. Awwww. XD "Near mode" That was funny at the end when Near said he didn't know how to wash up XDDD
AnonZ chapter 1 . 3/25/2013
I enjoyed the story, thank you for posting it!
"...would usually have been reluctant to see him anywhere near" - "near"... oh my, I've probably been reading way too much work by Tierfal (wonderful stories where bad puns flow abundantly )!

Some constructive criticism:
Actually it did seem a bit too much like a recipe to me. If I were you I wouldn't actually change the baking instructions - to me those detailed descriptions seem to fit Near's analytical style, but maybe a few more of Gevanni's thoughts mixed in.
Perhaps something about that protectiveness he seems to have developed? Or a bit more on what Gevanni thinks about the baking being in stark contrast to Near's usual behavior (it *is* a bit OOC, but if we can notice it, so can Gevanni). (Maybe then the "Drama" classification would make more sense; right now I haven't detected that much drama.)
That bit with the cake being a mixture of L's, Mello's and Near's tastes is great; though I would like to know why he cares - what are his relationships with L and Mello? Is it the canon timeline (with L dead and Mello-Near conflict)?
And I think the other guy's spelled "Rester". Sorry for being a neat freak like that. :)

I loved the idea of "Near-mode"!
And of course you've left me with an appetite for Frosted Choc-Orange Cake - should've expected that when clicking on a story with "cake" in its title... :D [So on another note the detailed instructions are really cool because that sounds like a cake I might be tempted to try myself!]

Soo... end of this long review. :) I hope there's something useful for you in here and I'll be checking your account for new stories. Again: Thank you for posting!
Arysthae chapter 1 . 2/4/2013
This story was pretty cutesy. It's a little OOC, I think Near would be a little too preoccupied with solving crime to bake, but you know, he seems to find time for a tonne of other things, and this was fairly in character as far as the actual cooking went XD

Nice work! :)